Reviews for Swordsmen of Twilight
Shifuru chapter 7 . 7/24
I really like the interactions between Asuna and Naruto. Ufufu.
Icewolf9879 chapter 7 . 7/19
Kayaba made that world for his little brother to live in because he loves to spoil Naruto and he made it where if Naruto is about to die the system changes him to a immortal object is that what your going with if that can it be please bo-con kayaba
spurs9 chapter 7 . 7/16
Great chapter! Stay safe out there. Hopefully, writing is a helpful escape from everything going on. Well wishes to you and your family during these tough times.
Guest chapter 7 . 7/4
Can’t wait for the next chapter
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2
It’s good seeing your still alive and ok
Guest chapter 7 . 7/2
pls update
Guest chapter 6 . 6/30
If Shukaku appeared will the would it be safe to assume the other tailed beast will appear as event or floor bosses even a copy of Kurama, or would add other Bosses from famous RPG series like Final Fantasy or Dark Souls? Since Naruto now has a heavenly chain when Zangetsu becomes Tensa Zangetsu will he get the the outfit that comes with it or would he look to much like Kirito if he did? Either way hope keep updating this and your other stories soon. I also like how you are splitting the female characters between liking Naruto(Asuna and Argo) or Kirito(Lisbeth and Silica).
Angron chapter 7 . 6/26
Even if I am happy to see this story updated, this chapter however left me a mixed taste.

I am not particularly a fan of Lizbeth but I find it sad that this scene is only a paper and paste of the original canon with few variations. Will Lizbeth mop up the rest of the arc and even story, unable to declare her love for Kirito as in the canon?

you added Strea but she seems a minor character than anything else.

Naruto seems to be paired with Asuna, but what is/are the pairings for Kirito? Lizbeth? Silica? Strea? Suguha? (I hope Suguha, The Best Imouto had need love of her oniichan :D)
Besides, how will you develop the relationship between Kazuto and Suguha?

I like this story but I would appreciate if you could really diverge from the plot.

I'm sorry to learn for your father, I will pray that he will get better.
Yugi the Godfather of Games chapter 7 . 6/24
Someone been watching SAO abridged I c along w the Kirito Always Right Foundation episode as well so great job. Are u going to upgrade Zangetsu up to its Final Release Form or stop at it's Banki Form or for shits & giggles go to it's true Form with sword & knife combo should be fun either way u go. Stay strong o the front lines & for ur dad as well
LightninXX chapter 7 . 6/23
I don't remember if you mention this but is Zangetsu going to change like the anime or are you just going straight from Bankai to Zangetsu TYBW?
Gold Testament chapter 7 . 6/23
I wonder how things will be with Sugu when she joins in?
ahmad.kay2 chapter 7 . 6/23
I honestly thought this story was abandoned, I'm so glad that wasn't the case at all. Another amazing chapter with intrigue and mystery while also advancing the story and plot definitely one of my favourite stories I've ever read, keep up the amazing writing... Or typing in this case.
Kurokawa Uzuna chapter 7 . 6/23
i really didn't expect thus to got an update, i didn't even remember this story'll continue considering tge fact that i read this LONG AGO like in the last year or more. even though i still remember the story's outline... good job for your work many of it... good luck on your next chapter for Maelstrom Knight, i've already read that story of yours too... good luck on your life too...
Dasgun chapter 7 . 6/23
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Jose19 chapter 7 . 6/23
I find the pairing of Asuna and Naruto interesting because to most readers of SwordArt Online this girl is untouchable to anyone but Kirito.

I dislike Kirito a bit in the canon he is portrayed as a invincible player in the series, and acts arrogant about his skill.

I want to see someone put Kirito in his place during the story because he needs to learn humility.
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