This was great but FUCK EDWARD. i wish she didnt forgive him lol if you ever want to write a story were she doesnt forgive him and a few years later they meet again id love that

It felt so inevitable... we all knew that bella shouldn't forgive Edward but we knew that she would. And she seemed so...pathetic for you.

When he kissed Victoria, she didn't seem to protest nor did she protest when he continued to dance with her. Lol. Why is he bringing her up to Bella like apologising to her fiancee matters. Victoria should be apologising to her fiancee bc she went along with Edward! But mmkay... And then Victoria showing up to talk to Bella. How the hell did Edward even contact her? Find out where Bella is working? This story has too many sketchy parts. Just...no. none of this is ok.

Well that was bullshit. There was NO angst at all! And I hated that he started "wooing" her again almost immediately after the bar incident...and I hated the way the story was told instead then it unfolding.

Amazing story I love the drama. Please do Edward POV.

Thanks for the safe reading place ! I personally loved ur work

cute story, total truth in the words

So, Victoria was having her hen party when Edward kissed her. It didn't sound like she was too unwilling and upset, seeing as she was grinding on him on the dance floor while he felt her up!

Okay, I may have already read this, but my brain gets tired and forgets. And I may not have left a review anyway So I enjoyed the story. Even though I wanted to hit Edward a few times. LOL! But there was an HEA so I am happy.

So I want you to know I appreciate all you authors that write and put up with the jerks on this site. I also don't blame you for leaving. I'm just sorry I never remember to check your blog, Or STARS. :)

I am sorry for your bad experience. I hope to find you on the other site.
Judy

Lovely story. Drunk Edward can be an ass. But sober, he can be beautiful. I'm glad she forgave him and they made up. Will we have the birth next?
Judy

I literally cried while reading this. This plot is so good. The ending was all sweet. Glad I found your story :)

I reread this today, and wanted to come leave another review, because it's still one of the best one shots I've read. I love this story; it's both heart-wrenching and beautiful, and I really like this Bella, too. There's just something about her.

Hope all's well. :)

**I had to review as a Guest b/c I couldn't sign in to do it as me since I've already reviewed in the past. lol

This story was so heartwrenching and so completely beautiful. I was hooked from the very first line and couldn't stop until I read it all the way through! You had me feeling such intense emotions and I was crying for the pain Bella felt. Absolutely amazing story.

My heart absolutely broke for Bella and I completely wanted to string Edward up by his balls. I think what he said and what he did (I.e. Cheating on her) was so completely cruel. He did and said those things to hurt her. I think that he did work really hard to get her back, and I was really happy that it did take him so long to win Bella's trust back. I did wish we were able to see more of his regret about hurting Bella, because even in their one discussion about it, I didn't feel as much remorse from him as I would've expected. So I wish we could've seen more of that (or maybe his POV), because I was not a huge fan of his.

I was also a little disappointed in both families reactions. I know that they love the two of them as a couple and knew they were meant to be, but I was a little disappointed that they basically told Bella to just forgive him because what he said was a mistake (forgetting the fact that he also cheated) and then forcing her to meet with him. And then her parents by cancelling the venue and stuff? I wish both families would have repsected Bella a little more and let Edward work to earn her forgiveness without their help/ input.

BUT, even with my little frustrations, I still think this is an absolutely AMAZING story. You are such an amazing author and you really hve a way of capturing the reader and getting us hooked from the start. I know that I will definitely be reading your other stories!
Thank you so much for sharing your beautiful stories and I hope I haven't offended in anyway with my review!

It was a very beautiful and touching story. I really enjoyed reading it. I wish it was in Edward's perspective too.