You have no idea how much I want to see Shirou fully using his reality marble. You probably do but besides that I can say I am sadly in love, why sad? Because it’s been quite a while, but I can’t say I would blame you if you stopped.

an interesting perspective on Kayneth's character though it feels too soon for anyone who isn't Illya to have a Servant considering the Grail wouldn't be active enough to support a Servant yet though i could be mixing rules up on that matter, but it feels like Aoko is acting more like a subdued Rin then her own character which kinda bugs me, and considering what Shirou has already been through it seems he is being shaken up by things that should be below his threshold on such matters

it feels like Aoko is really OOC in how she acts, overly bending and such when she seems more the type, to just do something full force with no regrets. not to mention that the majority of the Clocktower wouldn't have the balls to diss the user of the Fifth Magic or demand anything from her (it generally being accepted that messing with or pissing off a Magic user is a Darwin award worthy choice) and Shirou feels like a more normal person or at least overly reactive to weapons that are frankly nothing compared to the NP he has seen and powered through grasping even weapons wielded by a Barthomelio.

Of course this is all just my opinion so feel free to ignore this, i guess.

those who have one of the true magics are called Magicians not Sorcerers, and the idea of something being a blank in the manner described by Zelretch is nonsensical, would have made sense if he just said 'no spoilers' rather then that. Otherwise good chapter if a bit heavy handed for the ending there,

isn't Aoko either older or about the same age as Shirou is? cause i remember her being around 17 when her story happens unless i am remembering things wrong

huh, well that is one way to handle UBW ending in an interesting way, i look forward to how you handle this story's concept

If I remember right Kariya Matou became a master only a year before Fate Zero, and that was only because Tokiomi sold Sakura to Zouken. So does that mean that this has changed?

Even though the chance is small, I sincerely hope you'll update this fic sometime in the future. It truly is one of a kind and it deserves to be finished. Please update this great fanfiction again.

dont really like how shirou tought tracing to lorelei. in nasuverse it was explained that the more people know same magecraft the weaker it becomes. if rememberd right

shirous tracing is a fusion of reinforcement, projection and structual grasping. and only Shirou can trace in nasuverse.

I am wondering when the grail war starts? This is the damn 21st chapter and we still have not seen the war. At least, I want to see shirou’s servant.

There is a BIG fundamental ERROR here. The was imperfect, but the Technique was perfect.
You wrote that both were flawed.

I really don't get it...
Everyone looks at & treats Aoko as if she really IS just a young girl like she seems and she lets them.
This makes no sense.
Also, Why did she come to the Assosciation to get a Workshop? She can just make her own. In fact, as a magus, she should already have one somewhere.
If she wants to make another one in the Assossiation then all she needs is a room of her own to fill up as she likes. The only things she'd need to negotiate fore are resources, and I don't think she needs those yet.

Hold on, Isn't Aoko "The Blue" a True Magician of the 5th Magic? So how is it even possible to try to trap her with such terms?
Even if there are those that don't like her there should be many that would STILL want her to be there, if only to have a chance to learn from her.
Really the Clock Tower's attitude to her should be similar to How they think of Zelretch.

Someone just kill Shirou already