hmm, I think you should do well if you shorten the dialogue. pace it with description of the speaker of listener. I am not really into Naruto, but I admit this is quite interesting

this is one seriously wonderful story that I would really love to read more of and hope that you update this again soon.

I barely found this story and I had to binge the story. It's amazing!

You updated last time was five years ago? I want know what next happen? I love this story!

update please

lol, the puppies last chapter were so cute and I love the names.
I was just thinking, when I first say the "no pairing" I was like, sure but I can pretend. and then Harry was a kid, and I was like, awwwe. this is so much better than a pairing. its like so sweet. we need more of these kind of xovers

5 D-ranks should be finished in 1 or 2 days

Hey, apparently you can’t review the same chapter twice. *pouts*. Anyway, I wanted to add that I love Nanashi and Naruto’s closeness to so many people now and how people have grown to accept both of them. Also his friendship with Gaara and having a father now are everything. 10/10 precious.

This story was amazing. It was exciting and well written and I love how you interwove both worlds and did worldbuilding of your own that was refreshing. You actually got me into Naruto and I may start watching soon. I don’t know if you’ll ever update this story, but please know that it was good and made my week. My grandmother is terminal and good stories are the only things keeping me sane. Thank you for that.

Hardcore fans of sasuke, snape, and the malfoy males always remind me of a guy a friend told me about who had a severe foot fetish. The guy offered her $150 to let him suck on her toes. I believe that such individuals really exist but cannot understand them at all.

This is already one of my favourites! I will be keeping watch for the next chapter. Great job and good luck in writing!

I need to know your secrets; how do you stay so dedicated, how is your writing so good, how do you keep such good pacing, how do you make such good scenarios, how do you know how to "show" so well and keep a good amount of telling? Like, your writing is just so perfect even the characters stay in character!

For a ninja, Naruto seems too compassionate in this story.

It's been 22 chapters and I feel that Harry hasn't developed as a character at all. I know he's six, but nothing has changed with him at all. Why did you bring up that Harry has a mind of a 30 year old before bad things happened to him? Are you planning to get Harry's mind back or something? If not, there's no point in mentioning what his age used to be in my opinion. I keep reading this hoping that this story will evolve but it hasn't. I honestly can't stand kids in stories and I was hoping this was gonna be different. Oh well. I can't keep reading this anymore it's lost my interest. Something exciting needs to happen or well, it needed to happen like 15 chapters ago. Thanks for sharing.

I'd also like to add that yes, you do have the translation at the bottom but your bits of Japanese integrated in your story ruin the flow of your story because you've got to stop when you get to see an unfamiliar Japanese word, scroll down for the definition and then scroll back up to where you left off. That, in my opinion not only ruins the flow but your making us readers really work for it. I do enjoy your story though. I haven't read this concept before so it's refreshing. It's not the same ole same ole fanfic that people like to copy over and over again until it's so abused that people get tired of it. I also like your style of writing. It's almost 1 am here and I've got to put this down so I can get some sleep