Oh wow! What a story so far. I love it. Keep it up.

ahh please update soon!

I absolutely LOVE this fanfic! It sends chills up my spine every time I discover a new secret and twist in the plot. It's so well written!

This is really good, please update soon!

So... I know I already reviewed the most recent chapter. But I read it again - actually, just read the whole story again - so I can review again, right? ;) This is one of my favorites, one of those that I keep hoping will pop to the top when I hit "refresh" on the fic listings. I know it's been six months and I don't know if you've abandoned Once entirely (and if you have I sure done blame you!) but if you're ever the least bit inclined to continue this story, I want you to know that you have at least one reader who would absolutely love to see what you've got in store for our poor star-crossed lovers. :)

Oh wow. I didn't expect Jones to be in their kitchen. That's not creepy, not at all.

To a better topic, I wonder if Henry's been conceived. :P

Anyway, loved it and can't wait for more!

Nooooo! Omg. I've just read this from chapter one until this chapter and love this so much. No problem about the short chapter, it was awesome! I just hate having a cliffhanger! Thanks for the update :D

Please hurry back! I hope Bae is okay! I am glad that psycho is gone and I hope Emma got help!

Wonderfully written story. Want to read further.

This just went into a whole other direction than i thought it would go but i love it. Keep up the great work :)

1) I need you to know that when I saw this story had updated, I gasped and then let out a little sound that was a cross between a meep and a squeak. Made my night!

2) I've been restraining myself from harassing you on tumblr for like the last two weeks. We really need more of this story :p

3) Glad to see so many of us correctly guessed the events at the end of the last chapter, lol! Loved their sweet conversation at the top of the chapter.

4) Stupid pirate. I seriously wanted to reach into the story and strangle him myself. I'd like to call him names that aren't fit for polite company and it wouldn't make me sad if the fire he set led to his own undoing. But poor Bae, I hope he makes it out with a minimum of trauma!

5) Don't be such a stranger! :)

I'm thinking that Hook finds out and he goes and tries to hurt Emma, and Neal through her. Please update soon!

I figured it would be. I just hate Killian and Milah here and want them thrown in jail for life for what they did to Bae and Rumple. I am curious why Bae doesn't ask about his dad though but that could also be because I am curious as well. I hope they are reunited and Rumple finds some happiness as well!

while i was reading i was thinking "oh no, is never that easy, you are going to feel apart and i'm going to be on tear" and then you said that is not going to last T_T well...I hope they get a lot of time to make Henry, I mean to be fully happy. X)

No No No don't rip it away so soon, please let them have a great evining together :) it was sooooo good! Loved it so much! Can't wait for a new chapter and I LOVE Colbie Calliat's song, perfect for the two of them :)