can u at least give an outline of what would have happened if the story was not abandoned plz

my dude...…. I thought the whole secret ancient dragon secret azula dragon secret fire nation man ozai goes to secret immortal more powerful second avatar secret prince of the fire nation secret generational vigilante pretending to be a spirit secret lost 41st division secret wolf spirits secret last airbender avatar secret white lotus society was too many plot points but you seem to be balancing it...…. just don't call indian a language it's really not there are hundreds if not thousands of languages in india and none are indian…...

Iroh

No offense but this story was a bit confusing... there were just too many POV's. I barely made it to this chapter. I though it qould get better because there were scenes that drew me in but even if this story was to even get updated im probably not going to continue to read it. Advance as a fellow writer Id say cut down on the POV's and stick it to the main characters. There's too much going on for a fic, it would definotely make more sense if it was a visual series or movie but its not making sense as a fic.

Sad to see this story abandoned.

I love some of your concepts and of course Avatar Zuko. And is that Lu Ten I see? Crafty of you. I was waiting on an explanation on how a Firebender would have fitted in the Dai Li with all their earthbenderness. Too bad that.

A little too many powerful OCs with a bone to pick and some grudge match to settle. Not a good combination if you're trying to avoid Mary Sue issue. Still though, I'm always up for an overpowered Zuko. It just feels like a great validation after all the shit he had to go through. XD

The Hidden People was a nice touch too, having the Blue Spirit lead them would have been awesome.

Anyway, great read~!

Please Continue , love this story!.

I love this story! It's so cool to see the effects of Zuko being the Avatar has on himself and others. And him being Kuzons reincarnation? Beautiful. Love the 41sr division hidden people thing too.

The spirit of the moon is actually Tui; La is the spirit of the ocean.

Finish it, PLEASE I AM BEGGING YOU. FINISH IT.

Now that the whining is out of the way. i will ask questions.
will Aang find out that Lee/Zuko is the reincarnation of Kuzon?

will the crazyness of Azula effect this Azula? If she does join Zuko will she act as his spirit companion as the Avatars have had in the past?

The Di Lie... Am I right in asuming that he was the killer of Iroh's son?

Also. if Zuko's family is dragon blood, would we not see Zuko being a little more possessive of things or territorial in some manner? While I do understand not having him to to powerful or strong in Dragons would it still not show just a bit more? Cause you got protective big brother showing in Zuko for Aang yet this dragon side you showed when the Moon spirit was almost harmed. He is only blessed by the spirits and holds no true emotional connection to them like with Aang.

Will we see more conections of Zuko with the spirits? Like them actively attempting to guild and maybe teach him little things as he doesn't have a group or really a master? After all not much can be learned from watching from afar other than form.

When will Zuko join the Avatar gang, if ever?

The 41st, have they tried to recruit others into their group? Maybe gain support from the White Lotus?

Will Zuko be the one to kill his father in the end?

Is this weird lady, a daughter of azulon? I don’t think so, but I can’t think of anything else. Maybe the nephew is actually iroh? At first I thought the lady was azula who found a way to turn human, but zuko has no children? I guess we’ll see...

Omg I got it - lu ten is obviously Sudhir. I’m pretty sure that everyone figured that out extremely quickly.

Since you asked for mistakes, I noticed that throughout the chapters (not this one), you have a habit of writing raze instead of raise. Obviously raze has a much different meaning to raise, but it might’ve been spellcheck being weird again!

Probs B

Omg what is ...it...

Definitely want zuko to wander the EK