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Good Work...! 1

This is just the second chapter but I really like this fic so far and it is well written , keep up the good work

please update

I dont like Godou, kind of annoying, how about giving Harry a harem, Alice is good and all, but kind of boring giving him just one girl, give him more, how about just removing Godou Kusanagi all together, give him Yuri, Erica, Liliana and Ena as lovers, just give Harry a harem, one girl gets boring eventually

please update immediately

Oooooh... intriguing...

It's goooood:):):):):):):)

It's gooood

hey, i just read this but i have to say that this was an interesting premise for a story. so i have to ask if you will still continue this story?

This was interesting. I'll be hoping for your interest to spark for this story again soon.

nice idea i like it (and hope you will update it sometime soon again)
regarding the authority of ascalon the part about being able to increase any force is seriously broken and even the 'handicap' of only amplifying any existing force might as well not exist as between any two masses there exists gravitiy its just so small compared to everything else that it might as well not exist but with that power harry can increase it to useable levels and theoretically make it a targetseeking weapon even if he shifts all the gravital forces from an object to the target

Nice. I like it. It fits St George mythologically. Keep making this, I like the concept and the story so far, though I would personally request no excessive lemons, if any, even considering the source material. Just a request, nothing more. Hope you continue writing this. That is all. Zyte out.

I very much approve of these authorities, and will be watching for more of this.
This revised version is taking shape rather nicely, I'd say.