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Loved this so much!

Amazing story! Emotionally charged! Plausible well written portrayal of each character! You captured the emotionally challenged Saiyan Prince so flawlessly. Really enjoyed the slow progression of change that he went through. There were moments in the story that sent up red flags about emotional and physical abuse that both bulma and trunks had been subjected to. But in all fairness to vegeta he’s NOT human so he requires patience, guidance, and unconditional love! And you wrote this so eloquently with Bulma’s character. Kudos!

I absolutely loved this. so wonderful and what a relieving experience. I love Bulma's words here. you captured her so well.

I Loved vegeta! He was just Perfect! Thanks for that Story :)

I've only made it chapter three so far and I hope you'll take my corrections into account and do some quick editing.

When a new person speaks it starts a new paragraph. It's hard to follow the dialogue when I am not sure who is talking.

Great story!

Loved it!

Good story, any chance of a sequel?

Nicely written you have a lot of talent!, im leaving this on my desktop so I can finish reading at work tomorrow. Do you have any other Burma stories?

Loveee it! great ending :)

Just found your story and I can already tell that I'll enjoy it after just reading the first chapter! I've been hoping to find a story of Bulma and Vegeta during those 7 years. Anyway, I'm off to Ch. 2!

Ps. I think you captured Vegeta well! He was vulnerable but not OOC!

Vegeta letting Trunks win intentionally is the most fatherly thing he can do to his son EVER!

SO proud of the story it is absolutely one of my favorites read it twice already and I'm still in love with it it's beautiful especially the ending I can't wait to read more from you especially with the new Dragon Ball super I wish you made stories involving Vegeta and Bulma in that storyline thank you.