I was smiling the whole last part of this amazing fanfic :) Beautiful

I can't believe how long its been since I was last on Fanfiction. It seems like I'm barely keeping my own head above water. But I think it is fitting that I return only to be hit in the face with your amazing writing. It always amazes me how you take little things and make them seem completely right. Shepards reactions to being brought back to life and now "working" for Cerberus. Perfect reasons for doing Archangel before Mordin's requirement mission. You expand on everything with such perfectness that I'm pretty sure you are actually on staff at Bioware! Keep up the brilliant work. :D

Okay, this is beautiful. Your writing is flawless, your emotions spot-on. I loved reading this. I always feel almost exactly like this working for Cerberus in 2 and with Garrus' return. Thanks for writing.

"There's something wrong with me chemically
Something wrong with me inherently
The wrong mix
In the wrong genes
I reached the wrong ends
By the wrong means
It was the wrong plan
In the wrong hands
The wrong theory for the wrong man
The wrong eyes
On the wrong prize
The wrong questions with the wrong replies" [DM, "Wrong"]
This sounds tailor-made to describe your Shepard. :)

Another excellent story. The voice of Shepard's cynical, angry, confused, adrift self providing a running commentary/counterpoint in her head was a great idea. I also liked the thing you did with the groups of 3 words (later, later, later; remembered, remembered, remembered; Shepard, Shepard, Shepard; caught, caught, caught...).
Shepard's revenge on Cerberus by blasting the bugs that she found with loud music was funny, but probably futile, I image all of that data would go through EDI, and she doesn't care.
The dextro vs. levo issue shouldn't really apply to alcohol though, should it? I mean, that's just about amino acids, not carbohydrates, isn't it?

I like it!

Your writing never ceases to blow me away. I'll just sputter away in awe now. :)

As usual, flawless performance with this piece. You always capture their friendship perfectly. I almost envy you for that. Keep posting things!

Damn. Just...damn. You're really good. This is incredibly well written. I haven't seen this take on Shepard's resurrection before, and you really pulled it off. Words fail.