Lucky Littleskng got to choose, I was afraid Nightkit might have gotten Blackheadt!

Hey Brighteyes Another good story coming up, I can see :3 I have some OC's if you need 'em.

Name: Sharpfang
Gender: Tom
Clan: ThunderClan
Role: Deputy, if not, Senior Warrior
Age: 70 Moons
Personality: Gruff, Understanding, Good with kits, Loyal, Pestering, Hesitates, Sarcastic and a bit shy.
Family: Amberburn, Rookheart, Tawnypelt ( Son and daughters.) Lightheart ( Sister.)
Mate: Flamestripe (Deceased.)
Pelt: Slightly dark grey with darker stripes. Long tail. Icy blue eyes.
Mentor/Apprentice: None.
Desc/Backstory: The clan discovered him on the edge of the territory and took pity on him, taking him in to care for him. He and his sister were despised by some of the clan, but most were supportive. He grew close to a fellow apprentice, Flamepaw, and soon fell over his paws for her.
He watched in horror as he tried to save her from plunging into the river, ending with her dying. He despised RiverClan (As they were fighting the clan.) and despises going into water.

Name: Lightheart
Gender: She-cat
Clan: ThunderClan
Role: Senior Warrior
Age: 70 Moons
Personality: Sarcastic, Dramatic, Not understanding, Loyal, Gentle, Curious, Funny, Good hunter.
Family: Amberburn, Rookheart and Tawnypelt ( Kin.) Sharpfang ( Brother.)
Mate: None, though would like to settle down with a tom of her dreams.
Pelt: Golden pelt with grey patches and light green eyes. A tiny bit smaller than usual.
Mentor/Apprentice: Yellowpaw
Desc/Backstory: Same as Sharpfang (Not the falling in love bit with Flamestripe and trying to stop her drowning bit :3 Buh-duh!)

Name: Amberburn
Gender: She-cat
Clan: ThunderClan
Role: Warrior
Age: 35 Moons
Personality: Sarcastic, Funny, Loyal, Curious, Aggressive, Viscous towards rival clans, Short patience.
Family: Rookheart, Tawnypelt ( Siblings.) Sharpfang, Flamestripe ( Parents.) Lightheart ( Kin.)
Mate: None, you can pair her with whoever.
Pelt: Ginger tabby with a grey face. Long tail. Turquoise eyes.
Mentor/Apprentice: Ravenpaw
Backstory: Normal clan life.

Name: Rookheart
Gender: Tom
Clan: ThunderClan
Role: Warrior
Age: 35 Moons
Personality: Gruff, Thoughtful, Cautious, Nervous when going to big battles (not a border scramble.), Gentle, Understanding, Loyal.
Family: Tawnypelt, Amberburn ( Sisters.) Sharpfang, Flamestripe ( Parents.) Lightheart ( Kin.)
Mate: None, not interested in having one.
Pelt: Black tom with white stripes on his ears and cheeks.
Desc/Backstory: Normal clan life.

Name: Tawnypelt
Gender: She-cat
Clan: ThunderClan
Role: Warrior
Age: 35 Moons
Personality: Stern, Motherly, Loyal, Dramatic, Grudge holder, Funny.
Family: Yellowpaw, Eaglepaw, Ravenpaw ( Kits/Children.) Lightheart ( Kin.) Sharpfang, Flamestripe ( Parents.) Rookheart, Amberburn ( Siblings.)
Mate: Tigertooth
Pelt: Brown, Ginger, Black tawny though the ginger is the most dominant color.
Mentor/Apprentice: None.

Name: Yellowpaw (Tooth.)
Gender: She-cat
Clan: ThunderClan
Role: Apprentice
Age: 9 Moons
Personality: Flirty, Joker, Sarcastic, Confused easily, Hesitates.
Family: Rookheart, Amberburn ( Kin.) Tawnypelt, Tigertooth ( Parents.) Eaglepaw, Ravenpaw ( Siblings.)
Fawning over: No one
Desc/Backstory: Nothing special
Mentor/Apprentice: Lightheart
Pelt: Dark brown, almost black tabby with amber eyes. Long tail.

Name: Eaglepaw (Talon.)
Gender: Tom
Role: Apprentice
Age: 9 Moons
Personality: Loyal, Flirty, Ambitious, A bit overly proud, Jealous
Family: Yellowpaw, Ravenpaw ( Siblings.) Amberburn, Rookheart ( Kin.) Tigertooth, Tawnypelt ( Parents.)
Fawning over: Whoever
Desc/Backstory: Normal clan life
Pelt: Brown and white tufts of fur with dark green eyes.
Mentor/Apprentice: Give him a mentor :3

Name: Ravenpaw (float.)
Gender: Tom
Clan: ThunderClan
Role: Apprentice
Age: 9 Moons
Mentor/Apprentice: Amberburn
Family: Yellowpaw, Eaglepaw ( Siblings.) Amberburn, Rookheart ( Kin.) Tigertooth, Tawnypelt ( Parents.)
Personality: Smart, Kind, Friendly, Good Hunter, Deadly if angered, Jealous.
Pelt: Similar to Rookheart's other than the stripes are a dark brown. Icy blue eyes.

Name: Tigertooth
Gender: Tom
Role: Warrior
Age: 40 Moons
Personality: Gruff, Grudge holder, Flirty, Loyal, Rough, Gentle with kits, A lot like Dustpelt and Spiderleg's views on battles and loving.
Family: Eaglepaw, Ravenpaw, Yellowpaw ( Kits.) Deceased Parents,
Mate: Tawnypelt
Mentor/Apprentice: None.
Pelt: Normal brown tabby with a small black tuft between her ears. Amber eyes.
Desc/Backstory: He originally hated Tawnypelt and her family, thinking a rogue shouldn't lead ThunderClan (Only add that fact if Sharpfang can be deputy :3) and always fought with Tawnypelt and her siblings. For two nights him and Tawnypelt were stuck in a cave, as a storm raged and they settled their differences, falling in love.

If you use them, I hope you get the best out of them ;) If I've missed any facts, just tell me ;3 I'm really enjoying this story so far :3

I notice a huge improvement in your writing! The chapter is a very nice length, you describe things, grammar and punctuation are much better-well done! :) I can't wait to see what you do next.

poor Littlesong D:

Poor little song! Love your ending.

Swiftkit! I think she should be a warrior in StarClan.

So sad but I am glad you updated :)

This is pretty good

Poor Littlesong! Blackheart is a name that suits him.

Ow. Brightkit!

Oh and if you want a kit OC or just an OC in general:

Name: Marshkit (Marshface)
Description: Brown she-cat with a gray face and paws. She has bright yellow eyes.
Personality: Stubborn and blunt.

Poor little Brightkit :( BLUEXSONG FOREVER!

A little creepy, but interesting!

Ooh, ooh! :D I like this concept!
But, you need to put in an prologue or some story content in your allegiances, or you might get in trouble with the mods or something. XD I don't make up the rules, they do. Anyway!
I noticed that you didn't capitalize Clan in the summary, either. The Clan is always capitalized, i.e. ThunderClan, RiverClan. And whenever they speak or mention 'Clan' in text, you have to capitalize it, too. XD

Blackheart is... an interesting character, shall I say. Will they have kits together? If Littlesong has kits, can you please take in my oc?

Name: Venomkit (If Littlesong likes/cares about her, you can change the name [or keep it, referring To her eye colour] for something else. Thank you!)
Gender: She-cat
Appearance: Lithe, smoke grey she-cat with darker, almost black dappling her sleek pelt beautifully. She has unusual yet mesmerizing really dark green eyes

Thank you so much If you take her in, and don't stop writing!

Can't wait for chapter 4! :) good job