This is the best fic of H50 I've read so far. I love Danny/Whump Steve/angst too. Congratulations

Great story...Something different and I really liked it because it was mainly Danny and Steve...please
write more like this...Well done,!

Loving this story and this chapter is awesome...nice job!

I loved this story...too much bromance...NEVER...I would love to see so many of these stories made into videos...

That was some serious Danny whump. Loved it! Also loved the bromance. The show needs to return to what made it a hit in the first place - the friendship between Steve and Danny. Loved Danny's "I'm from Jersey". Made me proud. It explains so much.

Huh. Expected nothing less from you. :)

Lumberjack dude definitely felt scarier than psycho dude, I must admit. But my favorite part of this whole story is when Danny says, "I'm from Jersey."

Basically summed up the character of Danny. Keep up the awesome writing and congrats on graduating (even if I'm like over half a year late on congratulations).

-Empress Akitla

Beautiful story with beautifully bromance! Love it.

I liked it. No, I love it. Cant wait for the next update on by the end of the week. I hope yoir writers block end soon. I know how it is, as im kimda stuck with it right now. I loved this story, tjey are awesome brothers.

That was the best Hawaii Five-0 fanfic EVER!

Nice ending. They both know they cant live or work w/o the other. Love how the bromance they have in caring about the other as a brother. Maybe you can do a one shot with them back at work sometime.

Again I agree not enough Steve/Danny in season 5 hopefully there will be more Steve/Danny bromance and less Steve with Lou

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loved it

Loved it! You had Steve wear his heart on his sleeve and that is what I like to read, particularly when it comes to Danny.

I would have loved to read another chapter about Danny back at Five-0 or something, but I understand that it's probably best to end it there. But if you feel like it, between your Man from UNCLE obsession (love that show too- Illya Kuriakin' s my favorite) come back and add a tag.

I so enjoy intimate moments like those with just Steve and Danny. I like seeing the gentle side of the tough-as-nails Navy SEAL and how Danny can bring him to confide his innermost thoughts, feelings and needs. I'm glad you stuck to this story till the very end.