You're doing great GSA! ( I'm still so happy that you decided to stay here)

And dude, Sketch, lay off. She tries her best, alright? Let it go once in awhile.

Another insult? Wow. That's kind of sad...

Not going to criticize your punctuation, what I was going to say is that this looks like a giant wall of text. Giant walls of text on FanFiction don't exactly look appealing.