Reviews for The Ridiculous, Unwritten Rules of Highschool |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was a pretty good story I just have a small peice of constructive criticism. Your style is good, your writing flows well, but the plot was very abrupt. I'm not saying it should drag on, but there was no real development for his complete one-eighty back to the boy she once knew. It needs a bit more meat to it, otherwise it wasn't bad at all. You have talent. |
![]() ![]() its a great story soo far update |
![]() ![]() GREAT STORY LOVE THIS FIC THANK FOR YOUR AWSOME NESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was so good! One of the best M rated stories I've read :) - Nira |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was sexy and cute and I really enjoyed it. I hope you'll write more stories in this vein. I'll read everything you write! |
![]() ![]() That was sweet, not what I expected but it still worked well and now you can't zalien brain suck me because I reviewe great ending. great fic x |
![]() ![]() Whoooooooooh! Shoutout...so happy :D x thank you, I think this ended kind of quickly and there is loads more room for this story to develop but I'm so glad you updated :Dx and what's here iis great :D x |
![]() ![]() THEY KISSED! |
![]() ![]() Yes, Austin! Why have you been such a prick? Awesomeness right there... will you update yet? x x x x |
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![]() ![]() This chapter was awesome...I loved it and I think this change of ally being able to actually dance unlike in the show is a POSITIVE development...I mean things certainly seemed to be looking 'up' for Austin anyways ;) please update x |
![]() ![]() I'm trying to get you those 70 reviews x |
![]() ![]() I love the references you make to the tv show like craft camp and alligator but still make it something in its own right too x please update x |
![]() ![]() I really want to know how things turned out x |