I loved this one so much! Maybe think about continuing this and the shrimp in New York please? You are a great writer

Person, you're alive! XD

Interesting set of events. Us it a one shot? Until next time.

Yaaaaaaaaay

Fantastic! It was a long time, but it was well worth it. I really do enjoy your writing a lot!

You are actually a good writer. You work could use a little touch up here and there. I will like to continue reading so keep it up

Good job! Btw did you know the author of "The Fault in Our Stars" has a YouTube channel! I think he has 1 million-2 million subscribers

Good job! Although I'm pretty sure you say English subbed not Japanese subbed

Very bittersweet, but I like it anyway. It shows fantastic struggle and emotion. Can't wait for the next. Maybe something happy, or at least happier. It would make my month. Awesome!

This is a good story. I would like to join the community and post my fav couple stories. I already have a GaLe story I'd like to post

... Damn. This was powerful. That last scene really did it for me. I kept hoping there would be a cure or it would be a dream. Sigh. It was tough to keep reading. What inspired this? It was really something. Until next time.

This is true, unconditional love. It's actually making me cry QAQ even with the small mess-up at the beginning of the chapter, but I think you just copy-pasted this twice.

Loved it. Of course I thought it was Gajeel at first. Great chapter.

Awww, I'm sick too! We can be sick buddies, right? Right? No? Ok...

When he said mommy, I got confused because I thought it was Gajeel xD

You... Should... CONTINUE THIS! And soon please.