| Reviews for White |
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  Itxixitxigc chapter 3 . 7/14 I wanna see Tsunades reaction. I NEED to see Tsunades reaction. |
 LadyMaluHolmes chapter 3 . 9/11/2019 This chapter was so cute and hilarious. very nice fanfiction |
| BatmanForPresident chapter 3 . 7/12/2019 I LOVE this! I really really hope you come back to this some day! this is fantastic! |
| DreamsOfTheDamn chapter 2 . 5/21/2019 This scene is so heartwarming, I can't help but tear up at the end! |
| Nolifesoiread chapter 3 . 2/7/2019 I love this! I’ve been looking for a good story with Jiraiya as a father for a while now. Found some but this is the BEST. Love how you write the child and the way they interact. Know you’ll update when you feel like so I won’t demand more. Just wanted to tell you this is awesome, thanks! |
| ar111 chapter 3 . 10/26/2018 aww I like this story, hope u start updating eventually |
| UnluckyAmulet chapter 3 . 10/14/2018 Aww, that last chapter was really heartwarming. Obviously there's a lot of awkwardness between Shirane and Jirairya right now, but him freaking out because he didn't think to ask what gender his child was is pretty hilarious. Seems like the pervy sage is going to be a bit overprotecting now that he knows he has a daughter instead of a son. The scene where she woke up to him carrying her was sweet, too. One thing that stuck out to me was, "I didn't know it, but I was crying in my sleep" ...so...how did she know to tell us that in the first place? XD ~Amulet |
| byebay chapter 2 . 9/11/2018 It was very, very clear. I actually think you succeded in showing rather than writing. The snippets of personality we get, the little gestures, it really gave a good feel of the main characters, of her life up to this point and of Jiraiya who kudos to you, is specially well written. I enjoyed it greatly. |
| Tweak Tweak chapter 3 . 9/9/2018 I'm really enjoying this. Thanks so much for sharing it. :) |
| bored411 chapter 3 . 8/15/2018 i LOVE this so far. i just found it but it's amazing and i can't wait to see how their relationship grows and how she deals with the people in konoha. so i do hope you get around to updating this soon :) amazing job! |
| cwrywn chapter 3 . 7/29/2018 hahahaha how hilarious Jiraiya's reaction was? Hahahah Ohhhh I wish this was continued, I would really love to see her grow up. |
| ThePirateQueen367 chapter 3 . 4/21/2018 Aww this is so cute! |
| DreamsOfTheDamn chapter 3 . 2/20/2018 Jiraiya reaction made me tear up a bit. Love it! |
| Big Fan chapter 3 . 1/3/2018 This is a cute story. I hope you come back to it. Will she travel across the world with him? |
| darth valkorion chapter 1 . 12/16/2017 please update this is amazing |
