Reviews for Hellsing's new card |
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Blueluna12 chapter 4 . 7/22 She seems like a badass so far. Also find this a bit lucky that it got updated after I found this. |
MajorCurious007 chapter 4 . 7/22 Alucard! No! |
Blueluna12 chapter 3 . 7/22 This story seems interesting. I want to know more and hope this fic continues! |
MajorCurious007 chapter 3 . 7/19 This is so good! I love that she's able to hide from Alucard of all people (does people work when describing Alucard?) |
MajorCurious007 chapter 2 . 7/11 I liked both, but indefinitely think this is a much smoother, more clean cut version. Good job doll! Cant wait to see what happens next! |
The Grand Dragon of Light chapter 1 . 12/31/2019 The worst sin a FanFiction Fan can commit is ignorance ... ignorance of new updates and I plead guilty TT—TT Sorry I was unaware of this great fic for so long, I can see the end of 2019 reading it (don’t go 2019, I miss you already!) Thanks in advance for all the great chapters I’m about to read and hope to see ya in 2020! Laters :) |
missironhawk chapter 2 . 2/1/2019 Yuki is such a Mary-Sue that it ruined this story, I like your writing and all but...She knew everything before it happened and it seems so useless to read the rest. She is very stoic and has no personality, I would have waited to read her backstory, but the fighting scenes revolve around the fact that she can take them down without a mark or ANYTHING. If you want more people to read your OC story, I suggest getting rid of the Mary-Sue characteristic first. Just a bit of critique. :') |
Misia0123 chapter 11 . 2/5/2017 This is great! At first I found it a tiny bit boring. As the oc was seriously utterly stoic and all.. but gradually I stuck with it and here I am, completley engrossed in this fanfic! I have a feeling the the hellsing ultimate arc that you did for the first 9 ish chapters, was like an introduction and character development for Yuki. You know. Like a setting, which worked out brilliantly by the way, for the entire fanfic. I'm super excited for this story now. It really does feel like its only just started. XD poor alucard... i feel so bad for him now. It feels weird to see him so weak and vulnerable because of her... I hope everything will work out in favour for him in the end. Amazing job so far! Keep it up and goodluck in writing the next chapter! |
bfireworks5 chapter 11 . 2/6/2016 y is Yuki with them and wat is a yamauchi? update soon |
live4fiction chapter 11 . 2/1/2016 God, you have NO idea how much I love this story! I cant wait for the next update but there's no need to rush XD :) |
deathelk chapter 1 . 1/31/2016 I'm rereading this, and noticed you really need to go through and edit this, or have someone do it for you. the plot is very interesting and I like it, but it really needs editing. I'd be very happy to go through each chapter and edit for you! |
bfireworks5 chapter 10 . 11/4/2015 Sooooo... Y is Yuki with the Japanese? Update soon |
Karina chapter 10 . 11/1/2015 Quero, mais isso tá muito bom nem vejo a hora pra próxima atualização |
MonaTheGreat chapter 9 . 10/21/2015 I have thoroughly enjoyed this, how fortunate that your two muses happen to be my favorite fandoms. Your writing is growing stronger by the chapter. It is truly enchanting to read. |
Guest chapter 2 . 10/9/2015 Hey I read the last chapter and I am loving the story but I need to ask what that song Yuki was listening to was made up or if it was real. If it was what is it called,? Again I love it a lot and think Yuki is an amazing character. |