This is such a satisfying story, I can't believe it's finished either! I need to mentally prepare myself for the sequel now.

Thank you for writing such an amazing story! I really enjoyed it. Looking forward to the sequel

I've missed so much! I'm sorry my life hasn't stopped recently so have just caught up with this story now. I love all the chapters though :-D This ending is fantastic it all flows really well and I love how your setting bits up for the sequel already. I'm so happy Kid and Law got to be together, though I feel that Doflamingo won't let that be the last time he see's Law. So can't wait to find out how this continues and what he makes Kid do for him as his personal assassin :-). Also thought with Roger steppping in was a great touch, I could imagine Doflamingo stepping down if faced with someone like that. Just can't believe it's ended! Well done for completing this part of your story (know your plannning sequel :3). Again I'm so sorry for this late reviews but all the chapters I missed reviewing are also fantastic! :-D

Looking forward to Law finding happiness, and maybe also getting some of the strength and confidence he had at the very beginning of this story. Fight scenes are hard. I'm hearing you on the Vergo scenes. It read well, could maybe be drawn out just a little more for pacing, but I know that involves more writing :-) I liked all of this but had trouble with this line: "That I'm gonna steal Law and fuck him in front of the palace where that pink bastard could see."". It seems that Kid regards Law ias an object to humiliate or use to boost his own ego in the same way that Doflamingo does. I wish there was more respect from him toward Law in this case. I doubt that Law would be into it, but who knows? Everything else worked well, and I hope Law and Lamie can live an independent life. Kid definitely had a grudge and understandably with Doflamingo.

The Monet and Penguin sections were interesting.

OMGTHANKYOUFORUPDATING!
So I was sad when canon Monete died. But this one was I was like "drown on your own blood b*tch!"
Awesome chapter and I am looking forward to the next one!

I just binge read this entire story and now I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm rooting for our Eustass to win!

Platonic or romantic, any LawLu interactions are the best!
It's ending? Gah! I don't think I'm prepared for that. Considering at one point I think you said it's not gonna be a "happy" ending for Law and Kid. There's a sequel right?
Awesome chapter! Loved it! Looking forward to the next one!

For one, I'm really happy that Kid still didn't get swayed out from his resolution to win and save Law no matter what other people around him and even Law himself said ('brokenhearted from misunderstanding' and 'easily believe cruel lies' can make me so frustrated sometimes). That's the spirit! I'll cheer up for u, Kiddo!

Thanks for the new chapter! I am glad ur still alive and well! (Still hoping for good ending for Donflamingo _ )
Have a wonderful day!

Like it? I loved it! I had ten minutes to get ready but I saw this update this morning and thought "f*ck it" I can give five minutes. And I did.
This chapter was great. And while I miss your regular updating schedule the surprise out of the blue chapters and how good they are make waiting worth while :)
Thank you for the update! Looking forward to the next chapter!

aww...
why you remind me to cora-san
that was so sad when cora-san say 'i love you'
to law ( T T )
in this chapter i know a little bit about pinguin,shachi,and bepo are ex-slave
i really want to know about past law and them
thank you for update this chapter and reply me
will wait for next chapter

I'm still here! I love your story and I can't wait for the next chapter! Even if it take a couple months! It's always a relief when a chapter update comes up and it's not the author note saying they lost interest in the story. I hope the socializing gets better for you! Till next time!

Ahh I could never kill you! That would mean ending this awesome fic xD. Also like I said before I really don't mind waiting, I read manga I'm used to waiting for chapters lol (especially hunter x hunter 0_o). Back to this though, Law! I hope Doffy feels at least a bit bad if he comes into Law's room (that was not meant to reference Law's power xD) and see's the state he's now in. Though it makes the drama even more interesting to see which direction the story will now go in as Doffy knows. Also poor Kid potentially winning even when he doesn't try :3 maybe he can find an escape route via Lami's 'friends'... Loving the bit of backstory around Corazon's death and the Doflaw interaction, though weird to see them interacting so well :). Good luck with your book! Are you allowed to say what it's about or is that a secret until it's published? :-D. Again thanks so much on the update (I may have squealed when I saw it). But please take your time, I'm happy to wait would only be disappointed if you didn't continue (but you already said you wouldn't do that) so always know it's just life xD. Thanks again for the update and I'll look forward to the next one! :)

Ok, first off: AHHHHHHH *deep breath* AHHHHHHH! Thank u for the awesome chapter!

And that ending was brilliant! All that sadness and tension throughout the chapter then bam! Luffy, Zoro and Nami break it and leave me laughing my head off.

Perfect. Can't wait for the next update!

Damn! how can i never notice this amazing fanfic
really love this story i hope you still continue this story until end
I have a request please more moment of doflaw really love this couple