Reviews for The Surge
EDJennie chapter 1 . 3/31/2017
My God! Mu heart hurts... and I can't get that last image out of my mind. This is so beautiful and sad. I was going to mark this as my favorite but I don't think I could read it again. I do hope you write some more in the future... maybe with happy ending this time.
Faded trans chapter 1 . 7/28/2016
Oh my god I read this while listening to "Faded" By Alan Walker. And HOLY SHIT TRY IF OH LORD
DeltaGrayFraza chapter 1 . 5/24/2016
This story is so sad and so beautiful! At first I thought that Haru was going to commit suicide just before Rin wakes up, that way he never finds out. But this was an incredible ending and a lot better than I though! So sad! So amazing! Please continue writing, we need more powerful stories like this!
Yy chapter 1 . 7/14/2015
Omggg. How could youuuu i thought he died but then he woke up and all yays and then he died omg T.T
it's good thankyou for the great read!
zoldyckxtamara chapter 1 . 10/7/2014
I'm not crying. My eyeballs are just sweating.
LenKiryuu chapter 1 . 9/30/2014
I hate you, Satan, for writing this ;;
It BROKE my poor little heart ;-;
I really thought it would be happy again, with both, Haru and Rin, living together forever
Poor Haru, how it's going to be for him to know that his most beloved person died in his arms?
I love and hate you for doing this...
I'm literally in tears, and I was on school reading it!
Anyway, it is just to good-written for make me cry...
Sorry for my poor English, by te way.
This and you go to my favourites
aucan chapter 1 . 9/9/2014
God damn you Satan! You made me cry first thing in the morning.
Leprechaun chapter 1 . 9/4/2014
Y-Y-You...h-how could you. Nonononononononono
I think I just died too. My hopes went up and they went crashing down.

Really good story though, I loved it- even if it made me cry in class.
SheMajinGamer chapter 1 . 8/28/2014
God dammit satan... ;-;
acidnightmares chapter 1 . 8/24/2014
Well then...

I cried, like my heart broke into millions of tiny pieces and I cried. This was sad and made me feel lile shit. Like I don't want to feel this way but they are my OTP and to know one of them died (even n if it is fanfiction) is heart breaking and ugh my babies. I was crying half way through the story and then at the end it was a waterfall of tears and I just am tored of crying yet I feel the need to cry again because of how sad it is. You my friend have a gift, this writing was perfect. 3
Guest chapter 1 . 7/30/2014
Omfg my otp feels noooo Dx *cries for an hour* please write a sequel to this it was so amazing yet so sad! I got my hopes up when Rin woke up and literally started screaming NONONONONO when he died :c not much can get me to cry but this definitely had me crying like a baby. I can't even express in words how amazing this story is!
Rei chapter 1 . 7/29/2014
I teared up some, godamnit! I fricken teared up man! That was insanely beautiful, but just know that if I ever reread this and even now I'm just going to pretend whatever happened past Rin and Haru going to sleep never happened! Just gonna pretended it ended with them both still with each other and Rin still alive :'( still awesome fic man!
matsuky1407 chapter 1 . 7/31/2014
Awww nooo you just broke my heart into a billion pieces. This is the first ever rinharu fic Ive read but this is just too waaaa though it's very heartbreaking I must say that this is one of the most beautiful pieces Ive read here in FF. Words cant express how much I loved your story though it killed me. Thanks for writing this.
MaxandFang101 chapter 1 . 7/31/2014
When I said I wanted you to end a story, I did not mean like this. This broke my heart in half and now all I want to believe is that by some miracle/curse Haru has a fatal disease that has chosen that moment to strike and that he dies in Rin's arms as well. You are horrible for writing this but I love you for it. Sick and evil and CRUEL. Those were all of my emotions through reading the last parts. I hope Rin and Haru are in some kind of safe haven in heaven being together and that is the only outcome I will believe.
dianna44 chapter 1 . 7/30/2014
I just reviewed on AO3...I saw your profile name and remember thinking that it seemed really familiar and then I realized that you wrote one of my faves for rinharu "pretty mornings" so yeah...like I said on AO3...holy hell I'm sobbing.
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