It needs a follow up. Loved

That was sweet. I like how you incorporated so many plot points too.

Loved it!

Beautiful!

Loved this one.

Awesome start! I love it! I cant wait to read more!

Your version of his dreams was powerful and the images were very well described. I wanted to comfort him when he was terrified or sad and laugh with him when he was with Felicity and truly happy and at peace. Your story really made me believe you know Oliver and how to bring his character to life.

This is so very sweet.

That was just lovely, such a beautiful, heartbreaking progression. Beautifully done.

Oh this was just so beautifully written and I jsut love the idea of him being that attached and affected by her since so early on and it was nice to see that he has good dreams about her and the future that is possible if he gives into his feeling. Loved it!