Reviews for Cracks
mstonks chapter 17 . 11/17/2018
OMG this is amazing! I wish you would come back and continue the story, if you ever do this I'll be looking forward to read it
nursenxn chapter 17 . 1/7/2017
I am So Glad you are back to writting this story! I love reading,, and then to find an unfinished story leaves my imiagination running. I usually send one PM to ask the author if they had thought of finishing said story. What ever you reason, I am gladyou are back. I went back and read it from the begining so I could get the flow back
Thank you
momo0424 chapter 17 . 12/27/2016
Awesome job on chapters 16 and 17! Looking forward to the next update!
Crdr chapter 17 . 12/20/2016
Oh so good! I wish they would've continued that food fight even though it would've been weird with henry there. Damn
frs chapter 17 . 12/20/2016
2 more chapters? !? I'm in heaven lol. Love it! Thanks for sharing
rmpcmfan chapter 17 . 12/20/2016
I always love the sharp banter between them!
rmpcmfan chapter 16 . 12/20/2016
I don't know how they can stand this push and pull relationship they have, especially Emily. I just wish JJ would have the guts to end it with Will once and for all.
frs chapter 15 . 12/19/2016
Sooooo glad you've updated ! I love this story and I'm so hooked. I just reread it all and although it's tearjerking I love every bit of it. You capture these two so well and your writing is amazing. Love this chapter, good to see a bit of humor between the sadness. Literally can't wait for more!
momo0424 chapter 15 . 12/18/2016
Great job on chapters 14 and 15! I'm anxious to read the next update!
kpop1392as chapter 15 . 12/18/2016
I wonder if Penelope will be a push to get Emily and JJ together. Also, will there be any interactions between Henry and Emily? I don't really know how close they are and how Henry sees/values Emily.
I am enjoying this story.
rmpcmfan chapter 15 . 12/16/2016
I can just picture them having a blast just letting loose and dancing. I can also see Garcia realizing she has missed something big all these years. I just feel so sad for Emily, still protecting JJ at all costs at the expense of herself.
rmpcmfan chapter 14 . 12/16/2016
I know how difficult it must be for JJ, but she has got to get over herself and do the right thing!
Guest chapter 13 . 8/15/2016
Amazing story, love your writing please update soon!
rmpcmfan chapter 13 . 8/1/2016
I just reread this story and realized I really miss it! This last chapter shows that JJ has always felt that Emily was a risk, but I think if she doesn't take a risk she will never know what an amazing life she could have with her. Instead she is settling for safe and worst of all she is breaking Emily. Please keep going with story, update soon, it is just too good to let it sit.
Guest chapter 13 . 5/22/2016
Wow-just found this and read everything! Thanks for sharing this story and keep up the beautiful work!
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