Short. Less than 500 words.

How did you do it? Pack so much emotions and stuff into a writing that is not even 500 words. It might be better if it is longer. Key word on the MIGHT.

That's so painful. Age of Extinction goes on to just add to it. I could hear Optimus' voice so clearly in this. Him, sounding hurt. Nearly everything he puts his faith into either betrays him or is destroyed. Bless his Spark. Very well-written piece!