| Reviews for Forced Adoption |
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  Guest chapter 2 . 9/16/2017 Please can you update? |
 Crimson cat angel chapter 2 . 4/26/2016 Can't wait to read more |
| mpathy chapter 2 . 3/9/2015 Wow! Are you gonna finish this? |
| nerdgirl11 chapter 2 . 11/23/2014 THIS IS SO GOOD PLZ UPDATE ITS AMAZING! |
| pipster-14 chapter 2 . 10/25/2014 When are you uodating because this looks really interesting! |
| brighteyes343 chapter 2 . 10/20/2014 oooooooooooo update soon good story |
| derektwolf chapter 2 . 8/25/2014 Looking forward to next chapter :) This is great |
| Lilstrories33 chapter 2 . 8/8/2014 poor Chekov his Granma is dead and now hes been taken away from his friends love were its going Please update soon |
| bearsrawesome chapter 2 . 8/8/2014 No Pavel! Aww poor Scotty, having the poor boy snatched away from him like that x you can do Scotty's accent perfectly, I can get Chekov's, never Scotty x Probavly cause I'm Welsh ;) |
| Dannrose chapter 1 . 7/31/2014 I like the idea and I'm interested in what is going to happen next. |
| Sonar chapter 1 . 7/30/2014 Some spelling mistakes but I am loving it so far. |
| Quantum Solaris chapter 1 . 7/30/2014 I really like the concept of the story. But don't be afraid of bringing the audience into the story, make us feel like we are the characters, it is ok if it gets long, but bring us into the world. Show don't tell, there are numerous sites and books that can help you with this; describe, use sensory details or even trying to match someone's else style of writing (which really helped me grow as a writer). The dialogue is great I can imagine the characters actually talking this way. Can't wait to see more from you. Good luck! : ) |
| Saavikam69 chapter 1 . 7/30/2014 Poor Chekhov! Waiting for te next chapter! |
