Reviews for Perfect Imperfections |
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Starryeyed chapter 21 . 6/3/2019 This story gets better and better the more I read it! This is probably the fourth time I’ve read it and I’m just so in love with this story! I hope and can’t wait until I find some one who will love me for my imperfections as much as I will love them! |
MyKindofStory chapter 21 . 11/15/2018 Oh my god... I bawled like a baby at the end. It was beautiful! |
Symone chapter 21 . 9/20/2018 Really touching |
me chapter 21 . 9/22/2016 It was so good. ...i even cried. .. |
Guest chapter 21 . 5/23/2016 This was a great story! Good Job |
megannowell chapter 2 . 5/10/2016 Hey in this chapter you mention Inu grabbing his phone out of his locker but then a few paragraphs down he thinks about how he doesn't have one because he checks his watch. |
Guest chapter 21 . 1/17/2016 I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! Definitely one of my favs, AMAZING WORK :) |
MadScientist chapter 21 . 11/8/2015 Whole story was super fucking corny. Nice concept. Horrible execution. |
MrPedantic chapter 9 . 11/6/2015 Why would pupping refer to all yokai when not all demons are dogs? "Pup" or "puppies" is a term specific to canines. It makes no sense to call something that is not a newborn dog a "pup". You certainly wouldn't call a newborn crocodile a "chick" or a newborn bear a "kitten". Please do research before you write about these things. us/thesaurus-category/american/the-young-of-animals |
Sorryforthesuddenchange chapter 21 . 7/27/2015 I love this story so much. Keep up the good works I'm planning on reading teacher teacher and call the man |
Sorryforthesuddenchange chapter 19 . 6/19/2015 Not trying to be mean but you have several spelling mistakes |
Jay chapter 21 . 1/18/2015 You did well. For future stories though, make sure to be careful about changing between 1st, 2nd, 3rd person. During the story you had a tendency to switch, even if it was in the middle of paragraph. Otherwise, I enjoyed reading this. :) |
Jay chapter 19 . 1/18/2015 I never understand why people push someone out of the way instead of slamming into them & both being safe. Then again, Inu could have grabbed her and jumped. Sad it had to come to this. Ayumi almost lost her daughter over her foolishness. |
Jay chapter 18 . 1/17/2015 Those were great gifts. I especially liked the meaning that you put into the key chain. Really want to strangle Ayumi almost as much as I want to strangle Kikyo |
Jay chapter 16 . 1/17/2015 That was sweet. I wish it explained what Ayumi's problem is with demons. Also trying to figure out why everyone is leaving him alone, including Koga. |