That was... An emotional roller-coaster.

I haven't seen the original prompt (which means little actually) but it's a fantastic idea and you've done it with a touch (punch in the face) of angst. Loved it!

Lol I think that's my username. I saw the prompt too! But I'm not on Tumblr.. I think this was a really great fic. A perfect amount of angst, seriously. I read one where she dies as soon as he sees her. It's horrible. Jerza's my fav. ship, so keep writing! Can you also finish that fic about Erza being the uptown girl and Jellal being a mechanic/racer?

Oh wolfmy you've done it again.. Such a Romeo-Juliet type ending

ugh. it kinda hurts when i read the last two sentences. maybe more than kinda hurts but i don't know how to describe it. it doesn't feel good when reading the death of one of your fav characters. the situation worsens when she is having a baby. and the worst scenario ( or the best ) could be the baby's father end up dying too. but to me, this story has a happy ending. thank you for writing

I just burst into tears why why would you do this.

It was so sad... But it took me to re-read more and more, b'cause... it a bit hard for me to understand. Well, I'm not an English. Great fiction! Don't worry Jellal, you'll see her soon, ehehe

Woops, Jelly dropped his gun

You're ability to make people sad scares me .