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Rocket to face. Forshadowing

Shut up and kiss me. Best line ever

Poor Shepard. He's got to deal with losing a squad member all over again. You just know he's going to need Ashley

I don't want this to happen!

So cute at the end of the chapter. How does this story not have more reviews?

Shepard telling Wrex to "do what he does best" reminds me of Avengers, when Captian America says "and Hulk... smash."

Musical about detergent. Classic Garrus.

Just finished reading the story. I normally play as an Earthborn/War hero and make all paragon choices so seeing Shepard in this light was almost hard to read. But that's just my personal preference for Shepard. When I put that aside, I thought this was an amazing story and I really enjoyed the original scenes that weren't originally in the game. My favorite was Shepard's past on Mindoir.

I also loved most of the revisions you made. I especially liked Conrad Verner's alternate introduction. Definitely better then just randomly meeting him in the markets. (Also I'll admit that I wish the confrontation between Ash and Liara was as intense in the game as it was in this story.)

Great job with this story. I can't wait to start reading your next story.

The first part of the trilogy is great! I enjoyed reading every single chapter. Keep up the good work!

Another awesome chapter :)

Great last chapter and a great story overall. There aren't many stories featuring ashley/mshep that continue after the first game so I'm very much looking forward to the sequel.

I really loved the story! I can't wait until you post the sequel!

Great chapter really like this one

I know many who like Tali, such as myself, do not care for an Ashley romance. It is likely the reason why so few have read the story, regardless of your talent at writing