so naruto, (but hes actually kakashi)

Like many of the fics out there, great idea but bad execution. It seems like you didn’t really care about the story while writing it. From changing names for characters in between chapters to messing up the ages. It just makes you uncomfortable while reading it. Although I do recommend reading this story its still very interesting.

ou est ton chapitre suivant

I hope this story continues, it's super cool, I like it a lot, greetings, we're reading, bye!

I feel like with this plot you were concerned about age. Age doesn’t really matter in the ninja world, when you are a genie you are considered an adult. I didn’t like that you made Naruto Tsunades and Jiriyahs son. I would expect it to be Minato. It would fit more story wise.
Ps: There’s another book with this tile so I thought I was clicking on that

It would be cool if naruto awakened a Rinnegan on his right eyes since he’s Senju with a sharingan , maybe that won’t work but it would be cool tho.

I love the chapter.

Please update this story soon

That was great.

Last chapter it was yashiro now it’s setsuna make up your mind already

do update soon u have me hooked on to this, Ciao!

Naruto la niñera del Menma? Genial, e perdido una hora de mi vida con esta mierda. Que te jodan.
Estoy fuera.

Great story I really liked it a shame that it looks like you gave up on it because it was getting good.

Why didn't naruto train Menma i find it stupid he failed the test when he should of passed from some training naruto should had given him, like come on that makes no sense that all he would teach him is hand to hand combat and weapons.

A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story.