So it's been a year since the P4 games ended? Well then who knows which of the IT cast she'll encounter.

Let's see what changes Minako makes to canon of DxD.

you can't end it like this. please, i hope you still continue this! i want to know how the fight btw Minako and Hades will end up! I'm dying to know! ahhhh!

Thanks for the hard work I hope to see this picked up again.

I read this again and fell in love with Minako again.

Please let there be a chapter 44! Please do not tease us by not ever showing Thanatos's debut! I really want to see Minako and Thanatos go OP on Hades and the reapers!

The only thing I dislike about this fic is how much it drags on and the long switches between pov. It builds up tension and breaks it.

Makes it hard to get immersed- unless we have the attention span of a historian reading an entire library of books.

But in the game persona 4 tatsumi port island exists? In persona 4 they went on a trip for a few days.

So I guess this is dead?

I have to say, barring the odd typo and grammatical error confusing me on what you mean here and there, I'm enjoying this so far. This is the most setup I've seen a fic in this crossover have, and the way you seem to be setting up Personas to work in the DxD world is fascinating to me. I definitely look forward to seeing what you do with the idea

After a very long time of reading up to this point, it’s a little sad that you seem to have stopped updating, especially right at that scene.

I applaud your ability to write so much for so long, though I must say that it gets unnecessarily long at some points. I know it is your writing style to do this, but it does get tiring when you introduce a minor character and talk for 5 paragraphs straight about their background before moving on to the rest of the story. Please say only what is necessary to know or understand about a character, event, or object briefly and do not repeat information the readers already know.

Minako seems a little too much like a Mary Sue, but that’s perfectly acceptable considering who she is.

Grammatical errors do pop up occasionally, but they’re usually quite easy to forgive and don’t hurt your understanding of the story. Most of them consist of using the wrong tense, adding or subtracting a word, or substituting a word for the wrong one.

I ALMOST want Minato to appear in the story in a time of dire need, though of course that will not happen. Not to overshadow Minako, but to stand as her slightly different equal. While Minako excels in social situations, Minato would excel more in combat power (harder hitting physically and magically). Even though Minato is also a leader, he would probably avoid the spotlight as much as humanly possible and avoid talking to others unless necessary. Those who do talk to him would not be captivated immediately like they would with Minako until after actually knowing him. His powers and strength would be more similar to how they worked originally, being able to access his full Compedium in the Velvet room and fuse Personas but only carry a limited number with him at any time, as well as be unable to “awaken” Deities like Minako can. As a result, he also would only be able to activate spells by using the Evoker, though passive abilities and resistances would always be in effect.

please update it

you cant leave us like this on a cliffhanger like this we need more please update soon

Ho~ They'd probably look cute together. Cao Cao and Minako, I mean.

Hmmmm.

If you plan on smooshing them together, I'll support you!

Hoo boy, this story is very compelling. And really long. And good. I do have to raise a slight issue though. You seem to like misspelling Mochizuki Ryoji's name with a "G", it's spelled with a "J" it was never "RyoGi." I blame my OCD for this, but I kept seeing this spelling mistake every time you wrote his relevance to the story. Very frustrating to the grammar nazi.

It's real saddening that Crimson Lord hasn't updated A Demon Among Devils for over 2 years now. But considering it spawned inspiration for THIS story? Hoo boy I see good work when I see it. You've done some compelling work and for quite the length of time. You've gotten great kudos from us readers for that I assure you. I only hope that you can reach even higher heights despite the trails of real life.

This is a funny theory but I like to think of Kochiyo as Minato's reincarnation for some reason. This is played off the a fan theory that Minato and Minako were twins and the one you pick in P3P is who survived the Moonlight Bridge incident. I know it's dumb, but with how close Minako's familiar is it just reminded me of it, would be hilarious especially with how super silent she is resembling Minato's muteness until asked to speak. Especially since Kochiyo said she liked girls way back a few chapters so I thought, "HEY, IT'S MINATO REVIVED BUT EVEN IF HE'S A GIRL HE STILL LIKES WOMEN." Where the heck does my mind go?

In any case, oh boy did I enjoy binge reading this story... even at the cost of many hours of sleep. Your world building is high gear, and your character development is pretty decent. A bit weak in some characters however. But Kokabiel, Issei, Asia, and Sona's developments were very sound. Minako's a Mary Sue, but that's excusable. No seriously it is. Since we, the players of Persona 3 control her, she's pretty much Mary Sue since we do everything to get the best endings and such. I enjoy how you've added many human traits to her to still be relatable despite us players already knowing what she did. Especially with how badly she underestimated Siegfried way back a few chapters, it humbled her to be a bit more careful after nearly dying from her own stupidity.

I feel a bit starved for the other characters though. I know the story is centered around the Kitsune Faction and their characters but it gets a bit... stale if we focus on just that faction, especially with the world you built. It'll be a very long wait, but I'm looking forward to your next chapter. Keep it up.

I really enjoyed this story.
I love how you incorporated the persona mythos into the DxD verse.
the side characters and story lines are well developed and I find myself excited whenever a new chapter is released.

Thank you very much for the story, it is a treat to read.