Such an interesting and entertaining story! I SO wish the writer had finished it. This could have been one of the best Godric/Sookie/Eric stories yet.

I hop you write it, saws like a good story

please update... i love the story

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGHHH! You’re killing me! So many moving parts brought in to play in the last few chapters that were posted and next to nothing on the development of the relationship between Eric, Sookie, & Godric. Don’t get me wrong, I’m all for some good Bill bashing, but if I have to choose that or the developing E/S/G relationship, I’ll choose the relationship every single time.

I understand — truly — that real life can really get in the way of creative pursuits, but it’s a shame this story was left hanging unfinished. It’s very engaging & I was eager to get to each chapter, which is less common in FF that would be ideal.

It is VERY Pam to teleconference a torture party for Compton. Inspired idea for the story.

I do remember reading about Pam’s silver painting technique in another story or two. I thought it was an original and awesome idea, but my all time favorite Pam technique* was her embroidering intricate images on the victim’s chest using a silver needle & ‘thread’ (the recipient that time might have been Bill as well, but I’m not certain). Very Victorian. Sadly, I didn’t make a note at the time and now can’t recall the author or the title of the story.

*Other favorite Pam inventions were the boxes lined with silver that had pinholes & cutouts for the sun to get through for controlled damage from EricIzMine.

Sookie calling Bill a “lying jerk face” in her mind is a perfect expression here. It gives the sense of how young she still is while immersed in deep, serious situations with much older beings.

I’m sure, even if it is only about a fictional character, that I’m probably sporting a new black mark on my karma scorecard for happily picturing Eric’s very large fist slamming down on Bill’s head, squashing him irreparably, just as he barges into the room.

Aaaaaaaaaaggh! You’re making me crazy with stringing out Bill still being in the picture. Let’s get to killin’ Bill or, at the very least, Sookie openly dumping his slimy ass & get to the good stuff — Sookie getting to know Eric & Godric.

The vivid, but restrained descriptions from Sookie on the taste of Godric’s & Eric’s blood were well done. “Church jeans” was a hilarious turn of phrase.

This chapter also utilized too much dialogue from True Blood for my taste — I’m eager for new, not recycled dialogue. The transitions to twist the original scenes into your version of the story are nicely done though.

An enticing opening chapter, but a bit heavy on the extent of the recycled TB scene/dialogue at Godric’s nest.

really enjoying this story, cant wait for more!

So I know you haven't updated in a few years, and I'm not asking you to. This was a really nice piece of work and it was nice reading it. But if you do ever update again, would you mind terribly adding more Godric/Eric moments? Since you've made it a very important point to point out that they're all mates and have clearly hinted at them doing things in the past, I just want to know if they're going to continue their own relationship as well as Sookies. As much as I admire Kittyinaz, I can't ever finish their stories because it seems to be all focused on Sookie and her relationship with them, and doesn't seem take notice of Godric and Eric's relation. And that would be fine, but a threesome usually implies they all get their moments to shine with each other. And it could completely be that they go into depth of G/E later, which I hope you were planning on doing. Either way, I just want a heads up if its going to be focused on Sookie and her relationship with them if you continue. You're doing an amazing job so far, and I enjoyed it immensely. Does Eric know that his "Uncle" runs the hotel? Or that his friend is actually his "cousin"? I feel like Godric wouldn't tell him just to mess with him. And can we see some interaction with Godric and his brother? I know they're probably both sort of stoic but I can't help but picture them just hugging each other and sort of being clingy. Probably not the way you want their characters to go, but it's the only thing I can think of when seeing them meet again.

Great story! I Look forward to more!

Where did you go?

Beautifully written

Did you quit writing this?