Rue is giving me OOC vibes

I loved this. Just loved it.

This is really random, but imagine having your period, in the arena. Or dying while shitting. OMG! Imagine being known as 'The shitter' the restroom, in it's true name.

Why is Rue so overpowered? I mean it's like with Katniss. Katniss is way too overpowered. Not to mention lucky. Because of course there's the tracked Jackers, explosion, Thresh, Marvel thing.

Now Rue's way too overpowered, in my opinion.

Have Clove kill Rue.

Yes. I wanna have a look into the messed up mind, if Clove.

I think both Cato and Clove are mentally unstable. More so Clove, but like in a different way. So my assumption, is that they both ahve anger problems, however they take it out, differently.

I think Clove is one of those sadistic tributes. Just jading by how she was portrayed it the book, and in the movie. Also, imagine if she'd gotten this extra 3 years of training. She'd be way scarier.

This story was really good! And the ending was really powerful as well. I really liked how you did implement Katniss in there, just to show how she would have acted if she didn't volunteer. I am definitely going to read your other stories.

Hmmm. Chapter 7: The Scores. Honestly, like all your other stories, you have me hooked. I'm astonished by the remarkable scores that these tributes were able to score in this AU 74th, and my astonishment does not stop there by any means. Rue's alternate characterization really makes Clove much more sympathetic in comparison-and Clove (previously my least favorite tribute of hunger games 74) is really likable in this one. I look forward to reading this and the rest of your works

more.

i think it would be interesting to see how Katniss feels about seeing her sister in the games knowing she could have volunteered.

Here is the promised review!

I really liked how you showed Clove and Enonaria's humane sides as well as showing Clove's ruthless killer side too- it really made Clove very realistic in my mind. I love the friendly relationship between Clove and Enobaria too, and I'm glad Clove can talk to Chive also.

I feel a bit sorry for poor Rue - it was a very, very good character portrayal of her (the best character portrayal throughout all the many fanfictions I have read, actually, so be proud!) though.

I also thought you wrote Clove's PTSD very well too- I got a sense of what she was going through and that helped me see the Clove in Suzanne Collins' books more as a person rather than a killer.

Usually I would give some constructive criticism here, as I've finished the story, but I haven't got any (a first!) so hopefully that is constructive in itself- keep doing what you do!

Thanks for taking the time to read my review- I'm glad I stumbled upon The Victors' Chronicles many moons ago, which led me to this! It has been a thoroughly enjoyable read which I will recommend to all my friends- hopefully some will remember to read :)

Well, have a nice day!

-NTC

My heart is bleeding now. Amazing story and what a way to end it all. Hope you wrote more stories!