Love your story. Please come back.

Omg. This story is bloody amazing. Please come back and update this awesome story.

Update please

Loved the story, I'm sad that its discontinued.

Please update I love your story

Please update this too

This is pretty interesting! I really like it! I hope you can update soon!

lol I can just imagine Superboy's face when he meets Kagome again hahaha this fic is so interesting! I was kind of lost at first but now that I know what's going on, I'm really enjoying this AU!

What days do you update

I am not gonna lie, while your idea is very interesting, your story lacks a lot of things, like characterization, plot development, depth, details about certain circumstances. A good part of the time I was so fucking lost in the middle of the mess that I just went with the flow.
I kind of wished this story was as awesome as "Ordinary". That is your best work so far.
Would you consider rewriting this one? Instead of drabbles and erratic information that explains little to nothing, why not write one of those monster chapters? I find them more satisfying than these short ones that only leaves me confused regarding the plot and where it's going.
Please, don't be offended and consider my suggestion.
Like I said, you're talented, and your idea is fantastic, but I don't think those short random chapters are working in this story. I think your talent shows best when you write long and detailed installments, with good descriptions.

I love this couple as much as you do, but I don't know if I have the talent to actually write a decent story about them.

First off, thank you for actually responding. Not many authors do, so I'm quite grateful for the speedy response. Also, not everyone reads the author's notes, especially if they start a story that is as advanced in the chapters as yours is currently, hence the late criticism. Lastly, since you talked about build up and character development, I think I'll wait a few more chapters to see how the plot has improved.

But I've also noticed something odd concerning Kagome and how you've portrayed her. In the beginning, she seemed like a strong, independent woman (with yes, some overprotective and anger issues, but that's what made her so fun for me, personally), but now she appears to be really meek and scared. That was a... very, very quick personality change. I understand the people she's currently facing are big deals, but I would like her inner spark to come back, the spark that let her face off against Superboy without fear or intimidation. The one who totally traumatized the bad guys! I'd love for her to come back, especially since she could probably be on the same level as the original Justice League and their portrayed greatness. Maybe not on the SAME LEVEL, but close! Just a thought.

Ahahahahahaha! I knew this moment would come for her! Ehehehe!

Wonder what they're next encounter will bring!

I can't wait for the next chapter to see how that react when they learn about her meeting with superboy and kid flash!

Please continue. I can't wait for the next chapter.