It is Bulkhead you fraggin dumbass. Learn that already

When I first started reading, I was very engrossed. Jack had to prove to Arcee that he was a worthy spark mate and to his mom that he was ready. You even made me care about Airachnid, which in itself is a pretty amazing feat since I despised her at first. But, nearing the end, I feel as though you could've done more with her and the children. It seemed like the children were really used for consoling Airachnid, and even then nothing changed with her. Jack didn't talk to her or anything. When you introduced the Jack cyborg I was also very skeptical. It seemed like he rushed his character a bit along with the ending. Most of the descriptions going on AROUND the fighting seemed pretty good. But the actual fights seemed more like 3 things would be described as the actual fight and then it was done. Overall the story is pretty good. There are a few things you can clean up (I doubt you will due to how old the last update was) But still, great job man.

A very interesting start I think I'm gonna like this fic :)

The best one out of is my opinion it would be wise to continue

Continue the story

I honestly think you should have made Jack spend some time with Airachnid

Not cool dude. If his human body is dead, how will they get him into his autobot body. And he hasn't spent enough time with Airachnid.

Danm

Arcee x Jack x Airachnid... one hot three way.

This was a great book, it would be greater if the four children were accepted into the schools of witchcraft & wizardry, for a new series, and go from there.

Ya I know that song very well I had the soundtrack untill I went to prison, but I'm out and working at B.K. in the mall close to my house, but your story is great I'm loving it so far, I'm on chapter 6 going on 7, so I'll get back to you later after I get back from work.

P/S: I love the work.

I have read this far in three days, and i love it so far.

Keep going love your work

Ok, well, hmm, I don't want to seem rude or anything, as is. Am glad you decided to update this, but this wasn't really much of a chapter to be honest, now let me explain, the plot seemed like it was rushed forward, and how you ended it was a cop out as it was just, oh there's a new guy, bad guy leader dead, and the one person we were told died isn't, all in about a paragraph of space, the grammar was good and you wrote the fight scene well but compared to your earlier chapters this was a real disappointment, anyways, ciao.

its bulkhead not blockhead