Reviews for Picking up the Pieces
Guest chapter 8 . 2/6
Please continue this story it's really nice and refreshing
Vin456-0Z chapter 8 . 3/15/2017
UPDATES PLEASEEEEEE! IM BEGGING YOUUU
RyuichiSakuma13 chapter 8 . 8/2/2016
Awwwww! This was never finished? *pout*

Either way, good writing!

Ryuichi
RyuichiSakuma13 chapter 3 . 8/2/2016
This is really good! Your spelling mistakes and missed punctuation seem to have lessed as well.

Good work!

Ryuichi
Eleanora93 chapter 8 . 7/24/2016
Awsome! The link betweeen akio and Zoro is very cute, and the way sanji and zoro broke up breaks my heart! I liked have seen zoro tried to reconquer sanji, with all the difficulties on both parts. Great Job really! I d love to see what is gonna follow!
Rieska chapter 8 . 6/19/2016
Damn I like single-father Sanji! Math-teacher Zoro is one of my old favorites, glasses and all, but his interaction with Akio makes it even better. I can't even criticize anything but the typos and a few sentences here and there that broke the flow a little bit (I think one of them was Sanji thinking of his own parenting at the airport, but even that tied up when I continued reading). Also why Zoro would want a break and why Viola left are intriguing, I have theories but need answers. I'd love to see this continued!
Guest chapter 8 . 12/23/2015
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update this! u cant leave it here :,(
MrsxRoronoa chapter 8 . 9/17/2015
Ohh I had forgotten how good this story was! Akio is too precious for this world, it warms my heart to read how well he and Zoro are connecting. Sanji seems to agreed with me, teehee~ I'm fangirling for those three, their family vibe is unique.
I'm sorry about your laptop, mine had the same fate ToT Please continue soon, gambatte kudasai! :)
Rainripple chapter 8 . 5/17/2015
Awesome, I love the development in the relationships in this. I also liked that flashback chapter :)
Mary chapter 8 . 4/3/2015
HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE I BEG OF THEE
guest chapter 8 . 2/13/2015
I hope you update soon!
sa-mu-uu chapter 8 . 1/24/2015
Oh maaaan this fic is so cute omg. D: 3 Akio is so well written; he fits in so well with the canon cast that his existence feels completely and totally natural. And his relationship with Zoro is so damn heartwarming that I had to hide my face in a pillow a few times over how cute they were!

But, Sanji living in Rochester? Gods, what the hell would he ever want with this awful place? xD It's so cold and wet and full to bursting with angsty college students... There is this one restaurant downtown, though, that reminds me a bit of him. I wish I could remember its name. Ah well, I digress. Amazing job. c:
ForeverInAbyss chapter 8 . 1/23/2015
YEEEEES UPDATEEE I'M SO HAPPY RIGHT NOW * v * JUST. GET. TOGETHER. ALREADY. PLEASE :D They can't deny it for long anymore and Akio totally knows ;3 He's such a cutie -
Michikuni Mayu chapter 8 . 1/22/2015
I'm so happy to see that this story is not abandoned:'D . This chapter was good,I cant wait to see Zoro try to reconquer Sanji,maybe there will be kiss,hugs,alcohol,memories and a lot of things X). Continue like this and update as soon as possible:D
Paulie MickeyJ chapter 8 . 1/21/2015
Was this any less intriguing? And you say next will be more entertaining! Oooo boy I am excited! Akio is simply adorable... I so wish he fixes the broken heart of Sanji and Zoro finally gets to be part of the family... I love this story... I love it so much... and cant wait for Papa Luffy and intelligent naming of his kids Merry and Sunny! you are getting better with this story... waiting for more like always...
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