Well, I went to place my review on CA, but since I did last year, it won’t let me. Eye roll. Anyway, my second read of CA and this, and I still love it so much. I’m so glad I rediscovered it; and I remember you being so sweet in a reply the first time ‘round. I think it’ll just be a yearly thing. Your writing is still so powerful, and I appreciate it beyond being a fanfiction; I’m not largely into the fandom anymore, but I come back for the good writing. I hope you write in your real life! It would be a shame if not. x

First off, thanks for this story! I really like how you're walking the line between canon and something new; I think it's a great balance. I think the dialogue in Chapter 5 (where I'm at right now in the story) in particular was really great; very believable and I could picture everyone delivering the lines on TV. I'm looking forward to the final chapters!

its official. You are my favourite GGff writer. You write EVERY character perfectly! I am beyond impressed, every piece of dialogue is well written, in character and witty and snappy and laden with pop-culture references and seriously reads better than the show. Thank you so much for this story!

Awesome.

Sweet.

Liking it.

This story got REALLY BORING, I think you should of shortened it and left out some things.
Otherwise, It was written very well!
-Savannah GilVe B-

Even though it was not shown, they did destroy the snowman. At least Jess did. Rory had to know about it, because when she and Lorelai took the sleigh ride home, Lorelai had asked her what happened when she saw the overdone snowman ruined. Rory had a smile on her face,when she replied, "I have no idea."

If you ever see this... I wish you rewrote the whole story with a Rory and Jess! Great writing!

This is awesome. I like the changes that you made, including the additions. You write the characters well, and you end up rooting for them.

First of all, let me apologize that I haven't reviewed any of the earlier chapters, but I just couldn't stop reading! To me it felt like I was reading a story written by one of the original writers. The flow, the characterization and dialogue seemed to blend in seamlessly. I finally started watching GG and I'm hooked. I love the amazing chemistry between Jess and Rory and you've seemed to capture it perfectly.

this was lovely, i would love to see you tackle the next season :)

so. fricking. good.

What a great story! Wish this was the way Season 2 went on the show! Your characters are spot on, you are a very special writer

Ok. Your Lorelai is really annoying and I can now see why people don't think much of her since your Lorelai is spot on. If it weren't because I want to know how things with Rory and Jess work out I'd quit reading