Reviews for Blue Hawaiians |
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Lucehearts17 chapter 1 . 8/14/2017 I really really like this one! |
Ljk Rad chapter 1 . 2/19/2017 OK. So he Lovey-Dovey Nico. |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/10/2017 CONTINUE THIS PLEASE THIS IS SUCH A GOOD STORY AND DAM THIS COULD TURN INTO A REALLY GREAT MULTICHAPTER |
BadChat0n chapter 1 . 8/8/2016 O. M. G! Best lem ever! Nico really should have gotten Percy drunk faster. |
SPN-DayDreamer chapter 1 . 7/16/2016 Excellent fic :) I love the cute little lines like the "Later today...Or tonight" ones with just hints of what's been said but enough to leave it to the imagination too. The first few scenes of Nico were a bit jarringly different, but you worked in the character change well over the story. I think the dragon tattoo thing could use an explanation somewhere in the club scene - just seems very different for a Greek demigod to go getting a Chinese dragon (especially a Hades son with a dragon tattoo - for all the things they do that have connections/connotations back to their godly roots, that was just distinct for the character). And the Percy-realizing-he-might-be-open-to-guys moment was a little fast and hard. But you followed that up with moments that make Percy obviously the novice and new to the experience (such as the "knew he wanted the pajama pants off but after than he wasn't sure" kind of lines). Hope to see more from you :) |
guest chapter 1 . 5/23/2016 Wow this is great! You have have no idea how happy I am that I found this story, you're a very talented writer. |
HeartThrobbingFanticyLover chapter 1 . 11/11/2015 you should write some more for this |
Sarah Archer chapter 1 . 9/7/2014 This is sweet and perfectly smut-ified even though smut-ified isn't a word and, in fact, doesn't make much sense. |
Ayusa chapter 1 . 8/24/2014 Amazing story! They're sooooo cute *v* Thank you for writing it and posting it here! I really love your writing! You're my number one favourite author I guess. :) Keep it up! |
HowlingRain chapter 1 . 8/21/2014 Awesome story! :) |
JakeTano chapter 1 . 8/17/2014 That was a GREAT story. Even though it is over. I want MORE. |