Interesting! Can't wait to read more!

I really enjoy this story. I hope you will continue. Will Harry be resorted? Will they visit the chamber and find cool stuff?

kings cross station, not kings crossing

I know what a beta is but what is a plot guru?

It's an interesting take on the trope. That said, it's horribly rushed and incoherent. I feel like you jotted down maybe a quarter of your actual story here and left the reader struggling to fill in the gaps. Try to remember that we're not in your head; as the writer it's your job to paint the picture for your readers, to draw us in and keep us interested. If you want us to know something, you have to flesh it out for us. Details are good things, really.

I can see the potential through the chaos. Some of the characters sound a bit off, not just Snape but Dumbledore just confused me. Your writing style is a little bit messy so at least re-reading before you post might be an idea. Other than that take a breath every now and again. Rushing through makes the story a little unclear.
It sounds sweet though and I'm wondering where Sirius will fit into all this.

I really enjoyed this chapter and it's a fresh start with new idea.

Hi there!
This is a really interesting beginning, and I will definitely continue reading this story! I just have some doubts regarding the parts since Harry shows Snape the family tree... I think there are some missing paragraphs, nothing that can't be fixed though. In general, I found the rhythm of the chapter accelerating rather dangerously after the first part... Apart from that, nothing to say, really! Very good chapter!
I'm looking forward to reading about Sirius too, I only hope the adjective "impulsive" doesn't stand for "an utter fool, stupid and childish with an incredible tendency at throwing tantrums" ;)