After reading Brand New Start, I wanna read this one because i’m sure its good, but I don’t want to get “invested” in a story that’s Never going to be finished

Dude, c'mon. Continue the story. The fic has been really good so far, but I'm afraid to get close to your characters because of what you did in "Brand New Start." Don't abandon this please

PLEASE don't quit this story because of not getting enough reviews. :(

Nice touch to his day dream

This is absolutly perfect. They way Joel seemlessly trips out into reality and his own imaginations is very well written, I like each characters dialouge aswell, they really speak as they would in the video game, the plot is great, its interesting and I'm looking forward to more.

ArcAngel out

I'm sorry, but I have no sympathy for your excuse. Really? Not enough reviews is going to make you cancel a story? FFS, I've written 3 parts to a story, and the only reason I have quite a few reviews on them is because I asked somebody to help me out by reviewing it. Not ONCE have I lost motivation for writing it. If anything, it makes me want to write more. But, most of all, you know what it tells the readers? That you don't care about the story, that you only care about the attention it brings you. I'm sorry if this is not the case, but that's what it makes it seem like.

Imawesome, I don't know why your story is getting little reviews but don't let that bother you, please keep writing because it is a really good story. :) Now I could be wrong about this but I think some people are probably still upset about you killing Ellie off in your last story Brand New Start, which I think it was an INCREDIBLE story. If that is the reason why you are not getting many reviews then that's RIDICULOUS. Anyway I love this chapter. I love Ellie's jokes especially the chicken joke and Joel having hallucinations about Ellie is really interesting. Please continue! :D

You really scared I thought Ellie dying from the bullet wound and Joel had to kill her was real. I am glad he was hallucination. I hope you don't quit this story. It is really good. :)

I am loving this story! :)

I like how Joel and Maria arguing about who almost Ellie got killed. It was funny. :) Can you add a dog in the story? You don't have if you don't want to. :) Anyway It was a sweet chapter. Cannot wait to see what happen next.

This is really good! :D

I agree with you about Ellie. She may be tough and wise for her age... she is still a child. So I glad you did that. :) It was funny how Ellie keep complaining and I also like how she took out the bear. I really don't think Joel can able to kill Ellie if she wanted him to end her suffering. It will be too hard for him. UPDATE SOON PLEASE! P.S. Add follow/favorite your story if you don't mind. :)

Funny as crap :)

Yes! I loved Brand New Start, and i'm so happy you're making another story. Keep up the good work!

Not bad! :) TOMMY! :( Hurry and update! :)