Reviews for Book One: Dovahkiin
Lazy Author with writers block chapter 12 . 8/19/2015
okay! 2 questions, A what server? XD B, I know the feel of forgetting a story, you forget it, then get writers block and then you slam you head into a wall till something comes out. Am i right?or atleast that what is happeng to me.
Quintain Apprentince of Alduin chapter 12 . 8/18/2015
You know, I wish FFN had an Archive system. I'm currently using my faves as an Archive.
BrutusPrimus chapter 11 . 8/11/2015
This one's going on the favorite list.
Havic The Evolved War God chapter 11 . 6/15/2015
I love the story bro, hope you can update soon.
Ambiguity in D Major chapter 11 . 6/9/2015
This is amazing. The sheer amount of gleeful mayhem I can see this story headed for is glorious. Please continue writing.

Also, is there any magic Teo won't be seen using at some point? He doesn't seem like the kind of person to hold Necromancy or other aspects of Conjuration as taboo, but you never know...
I feel like he would be the kind of person to conjure Flame Atronachs just to watch them crash and explode.
Aster's Descendants chapter 11 . 4/15/2015
Ummm...just an important plot point. Very important. Hopefully Durneviir blew their minds long enough to get things straightened out again.
Resounding 'meh' coming up, though I think there's going to be a lot of explaining going on to get Arya to calm down.
On a completely unrelated note, how much trouble did (do?) Teo and Svana have with the Thalmor back in Skyrim?
-Philowen Aster
Quintain Apprentince of Alduin chapter 11 . 4/15/2015
Okay, what did I miss?
Lazy Author with writers block chapter 11 . 4/15/2015
XD nicee, but slow updates DX
Lazy Author with writers block chapter 10 . 4/2/2015
When will this be updated?
Guest chapter 10 . 3/26/2015
I love this story and I hope whatever is happening irl gets resolved for you!:D
Guest chapter 10 . 3/17/2015
damit this is no update
Quintain Apprentince of Alduin chapter 10 . 3/17/2015
The only thing I have to say is that using Durnahviir is an extreme case of poor use of a dragon... given said dragon is also undead... hmmm...
ficreader2011 chapter 9 . 2/23/2015
this is awesome
this is a weeping song chapter 4 . 2/15/2015
Nuuuuuuuu, Eragon don't become a sociopath! REMEMBER AND MOURN BROM'S DEATH GODDAMMIT!

Your doing a marvelous job concerning Eragon's personality. Got the curiosity down and everything. Good job.

Teo is an...asshole for lack of a better term. Don't know what to make of Svana to be honest. Seems like a nice lass. Don't give a shit about Mur-mur.

Your writing is good. Following pretty faithfully to the plotline of the book, so far.

So...good job. :P
Aster's Descendants chapter 8 . 2/11/2015
I would have liked to see some of these lessons being given-particularly the ward lesson, since I'm going to imagine that was...interesting, to say the least.
And heh. *That's* going to be something to rub in Durza's face when he shows up next.
-Philowen Aster
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