Reviews for The World in Red
Guest chapter 1 . 9/17/2019
The answer to reds team is:
A sturdy shedninja.

Jokes aside, Arceus maybe. Or the wish granting pokemon.
The3vilFighter chapter 1 . 11/27/2018
Absolutely amazing, one of the best stories i have ever read without a doubt, remarkable!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/8/2018
I'll admit it like a man, I cried a little for Red and Blue when I read this.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/3/2018
Red should've killed those pathetic trainers, lmao.
Ryoji Mochizuki chapter 1 . 10/2/2017
..., a - ...
Guest chapter 1 . 2/23/2017
Kudos!
Aqua Roxas chapter 1 . 10/19/2014
Fantastic story. Very unique. I can't help but sympathize with Red. The poor guy saves the world from various criminal syndicates, and the world basically throws it all back into their face and say that he has no right to have incredibly strong Pokemon.
ApprenticeOfDaedalus chapter 1 . 9/17/2014
This is a great story, and tragically, how most stories of OP characters like Red go. No matter how good they are, they will always eventually betrayed by who they protected, who they dedicated their entire lives to. Look a the majority of FanFics about Percy Jackson! And I'm sure that no matter how strong Blue is, he has no chance against Red.
Mandriel chapter 1 . 9/3/2014
This is amazing, I can see this happening so much, it's scary.

I really love the way that you've written Blue. I can still see that it's him, but at the same time I can tell that he's developed and changed so much from that arrogant kid that you fight in R/B/G.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/13/2014
Please write a sequel! I want to know what happened! Oh and I'm definitely al right if somebody died if you're planning on writing a sequel. Pleeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeee!
Red Zeppelin chapter 1 . 8/12/2014
Very interesting concept. Most of the stories here portray Red as a hero, or something of that nature. You took that in the total opposite direction. I liked that.

I didn't see any grammatical errors when I read through it, which is good. However, some of your sentences were structured oddly. For example, "The stress, it was breaking him" probably should have been written as "The stress was breaking him." I know your one-shot is written from Blue's perspective, and as such, written as though he was talking (writing rather), but I still feel like the comma you added was unnecessary. There were some other examples too, which is why I brought up this point. The example I used was just the most notable to me.

Anyway, good job! I definitely enjoyed reading it.