Reviews for Summer Rituals
Guest chapter 9 . 6/24
Just found this story (Updated September 17, 2019). Today is June 24, 2020. Is it a boy or girl? Maybe now you can update the last chapter.
jadesabrexiv chapter 9 . 5/29
Okay, I’ll confess here and now that I didn’t think “Summer Rituals” would be as good as “Ritually Yours” when I got the notification about it. I wasn’t as quick to read it as B1 and right now I’m regretting it.

Your skill at keeping plot-points in the air is remarkable. The subplot with Lavendar looks promising and I have a feeling that Parviz and Lockhart will be coming to blows later on.

One question I have for you:
How did the TM Riddle Diary slip past Bill Weasley and his Curse Breaking XP?

I hope that you’re doing well in this time of COVID-19 craziness and that none of your family and friends have been affected by it. I look forward to your next update and wish you well.

JSX
Nihatclodra chapter 5 . 5/3
while it hasn't felt like you were pushing Catholicism on your readers, it is beginning to feel like the Catholic themes are actually becoming more prevalent than the actual Harry Potter themes...
Nihatclodra chapter 3 . 5/3
probably too late now, but I came up with a possible way the Hermione could protect her reputation, give this explanation:

"A newly-hired teacher at the school ended up being a rather twisted individual. For whatever reason he decided that forcing an 11-year-old girl to be a virgin mother was a great idea; and thus impregnated her with what was basically a turkey-baster filled with the... essence... of another 11-year-old, Harry. Neither Hermione nor Harry even had any idea anything had happened until after Hermione went to the school nurse feeling ill. The teacher in question was only discovered to have been responsible near the end of the school year... and was killed in self defence when he tried to silence the witnesses."
kimjo2 chapter 9 . 3/15
Great story! Love your sly little references. Thanks so much
Lora chapter 9 . 1/12
While there are parts I like more than others, all of the individual stories are a bit overwhelming and hold back the pacing in my opinion. I like the stories Sally-Anne shares with the girlls, Dean's storyline, and Seamus' mostly. I like the letter writing book idea as well. However while I appreciate Neville got his parents back the whole relationship idea much like that with Parvati and Seamus seems to make the story drag. And while I absolutely dislike the whole Lavender/ Uncle storyline, I understand the plot point but think it should have been less convoluted and simplified. I have to admit there are parts that I skimmed more than read because I didn't find them as interesting and felt they weren't as integral to the story. One of my favorite parts of the story was when Seamus confronted the lady who insulted Hermione at her child's christening. I also like the way you've handled the Hermione/Harry story and his abuse overall. I think it is great that you continue to update. I just think there are so many individual stories you are trying to weave in this one story that by including so much detail the overall plot has become obscured and bogged down. Personally I think the story would flow better if it focused on the main storyline and then all the (forgive me) exacting and boring details of everyone else's stories were told as individual stories. It would be like telling parts of a story individually, and by reading the stories one by one (if desired) you would see how everyone contributed and how they fit overall into the plotline.

It is my intention to provide constructive criticism and hope that it comes across that way. The depth and detail of your descriptions are also vivid. Keep writing. Good luck.
RhysThornbery chapter 9 . 1/10
I really hope this story updates again. It is really very enjoyable.
starlite22 chapter 5 . 1/2
Curious did the grantees attend their grand son’s baptism as they weren’t mentioned as being there?
Umm you had me laugh at one point I’m sorry as I genuinely normally love your writing, but there’s no way on earth a couple of well paid dentists would be obsessed with the Vauxhall car brand, more likely BMW or Mercedes yes.
starlite22 chapter 3 . 1/2
I hope harry got his eyes tested and new glasses.
I must commend you on the depth to the characters and the story as a whole. It’s unusual to find something so well written.

Still a bit puzzled on Victoria’s parentage though. I think I must have misunderstood that chapter on his step children.
starlite22 chapter 2 . 1/2
Still confused so Lucius has three step children who are muggle born, but what’s in connection to Victoria?
BiGDeal chapter 9 . 12/21/2019
It's been a long time since I last reread the entire series and am glad to see that you're still writing. Probably too much to put in a vote for continuing this saga in the current series. Ah, oh well, now to reread the Malfoy tale.
Emma3mikan chapter 9 . 11/30/2019
Continous pleaseeeee
Guest chapter 9 . 10/29/2019
This story is really nteresting and I especially like Lavender’s character! The one thing I thought I’d mention is that in more than a few of Ron’s POV’s, he notes Ginny’s “developing breasts” in some way or another. It just feels...uncomfortable. I think maybe you as the author don’t notice because you obviously aren’t Ginny’s brother, but when writing from Ron’s POV, you are. So I’d just say to be more conscious about that when writing because it’s a bit odd. Any mention of Ginny’s figure would be a lot less weird if it were in her own POV or in Neville’s, given that he has feelings for her. Coming from Ron...I know you don’t mean it that way, but it’s just off.
SixFtWookie chapter 5 . 10/23/2019
They invited the Patils to a BBQ serving hamburgers?! Even after you pointed out half a dozen paragraphs before that the twins weren't at the baptism because they aren't Catholic? Parts of this story are so American that it takes an active suspension of disbelief to get back into.
willam and jack and jake chapter 9 . 10/3/2019
interesting
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