Cool. You hinted at emotions and did your own take on a scene I would love to see how you deal with the sho phone call scene at the hotel. If you do these the only thing I would recommend is that you don't rectify any thing that would change the main story. That way there is the possibility of it happening.

Fun

Nice one. How about doing a sequel? I would love to hear what happens with manaka, murasame, and most especially with ren and kyoko. you could even make more chapters out of this with manaka as a deranged psycho love fool. _

Wow! Nicely done. Really enjoyed this short one-shot.
Haha, I would love to see a sequel. ;)
thank you for sharing this fic.

I LOVE IT! I really don't like how there aren't a lot of Setsu/Cain fanfictions, but I think they are amazing material. I appreciate you writing this.

YES.

Chie, I didn't know you write for SB too.. Anyway, this is very fitting to the Canon, and everyone's in character! This particular part makes me giddy when I read the series.. ooohh, claiming her man like that! So bold! :))

Woohoo! U go girl! Xp really liked this fanfiction. Plz continue with more :D
Love your reader
Julia G.

KAWAIIIII!

I really like this. Personally, I think you should make it longer. Show us what happens in the aftermath. We all know Kyoko is flipping out on the inside, I so want to see what she does. Well written. I could very easily visualize it. :D

Well, she did declare it in the manga, as it turns out. But it wasn't as drawn out as I would have liked for it to have been, so this was an entertaining read. ありがとうございました。

I wish it will happen.

One word. AWESOME ! XD plz even though its only a drabble or one-shot, plz continue! *-* cause its really good!
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Julia G.

My God finally! someone put her *manaka* is her effing place...OOOH if only that's what's gonna happen in the manga! 3 I would scream and shout!

omg wtf Murasame?!
though I liked the way Kyoko dealt with the little hammster bitch (excuse my language)