Great story, I've been looking for stories like this for a while. It lacks a type of realism that makes a written story movie like but it's very good. Besides, having a story seem movie-like is a very rare find. Even rarer is the Naruto/koyuki pairing which I'm hoping sticks. I don't really expect Naruto to return to the nations on a permanent basis but it would definitely be nice to see him kicking Akatsuki ass and taking names. A little rushed on the first chapter Hough during the flashbacks.

love the story idea

can't wait to see how kushina and his sister are tied into the story. why were they together and he alone?

great story

will there be more chapters for this story

Is Alexis going to be all tsundere on naruto or is she going to be yandere

Will Naruto be kicking an ass, especially when he pulls out his Hashirama Level of power with the Wood Release (I expect quite a few Konoha Ninja's to crap their pants when Naruto reveals that power)!?

do naruto x koyuki x erzaz x fem laxus x yoruichi

Yes, please have kurama come back soon so naruto and him can team up again, and kick total ASS. Though didn't you say narutos has a sister and kushina is alive in this, so is the yin half of kurama sealed in them(or possibly minato like canon), cause if that's how kurama is reintroduced into the story, then rip that bitch out. Don't get me wrong I love kushina and sister, but I love kurama more. Of course my other theory is that you plan on use the bijuu reconsistution thing and that when naruto absorbed all of kuramas chakra, there was nothing left to bind kuramas soul to, allowing him to escape to recover his lost chakra

Excellent cgaptrr loved the fight and the teamwork combination. I also liked the introduction of Yoruichi.
I can't wait for the update of the next chapter.
Good work

Nice story yo.
Oh don't eat popcorn alone you made with flames, give me some also. ;)

"sniffles" you updated! "cries in joy" I was wondering if this was going to be one of those one shot cliff hanger stories that upset me. Now I know you intend to update but probably will take half a year to do. That's fine, I'm a patient person, I like your writing style so I can wait. You do though have a few grammatical and spelling errors scattered throughout the story. Till your next update, I will follow this story till the end, just don't expect to see many reviews from me due to me being on the iPod. Loved it.

What effects would sage mode have on lightning I wonder. And was Kichi really delivering love letters?

I don't know why but the idea of a Naruto/fem. Laxus pairing sounds very good to me. She got him into lightning magic and he gets really good with it because he wants her to see how good he's gotten and it manages to impress her and the bonding of the romantic sort could begin latter when he helps bring her out of her crazy.

Though I'll admit that a pairing with Juvia is appealing as well.

I love it

great story