Reviews for XIII (Revamped)
Ghostboy138 chapter 2 . 12/23/2019
The edge was so sharp on this Jaune I lost a finger. You do you my guy, but this is too much for me.
Guest chapter 2 . 12/20/2018
New cothes
someUntel chapter 5 . 7/6/2018
deathbringer is too op
Guest chapter 2 . 10/29/2017
To be completely honest, I would rather see a Jaune who treads the line between ligh and dark, rather than committing wholly to one side or the other. This path has a number of benefits to it, such as the increased realism factor, as well as the dramatic tension that is inherent to maintaining such a balance.

~NominalNumenorian
creativesm75 chapter 10 . 10/1/2017
good. anyway. have a great life.
Guest chapter 2 . 1/22/2017
White armor
Nexus Bladeguard chapter 1 . 10/4/2016
That was a ...very interesting intro...You got me Roadhog'd...hooked lol.
Lelouchz chapter 10 . 7/2/2016
I... honestly didn't expect to see this. Your previous chapters were all so good and there was no visible sign of you getting tired of writing fanfic. I really wish that I found this fanfic earlier, perhaps more fans, even just one more, would have helped you to keep going. I just finished reading this story and I was really looking forward to reading your other stories(since I love code geass, fate stay night and SAO) until I saw this announcement. While it is a pity, I do not blame you in any way. However, I do hope that you will return to writing one day. As long as you have no regrets, I, along with your other fans will accept your decision. Thank you for the wonderful story you have given us.
Screwthehype chapter 10 . 7/1/2016
Well, this is saddening... It had a good run, though. That's alright with me, I guess.
jakobnoshima chapter 10 . 6/30/2016
Understandable too bad though was great
IWEYC chapter 10 . 6/30/2016
Dang, there isn't much to say here - I just regret not spending time and devotion to reading this fic before. Well, I did, I just never got to expressing it verbally. Reading this before I made an account, before most of the other stories I've read, with a story this old, you would've thought people would've forgot about this story now...That just goes to show how devoted your fanbase is. At a first glance, I didn't think much - back then I was the 'go where everyone else is' type of guy, it took awhile but when I finally got to reading this, I was glad I did. I can understand having to stop writing for real life purposes, but let me ask you this.

Are you 100% sure, that without a doubt, that you aren't in the writing spirit any longer? Are you 100% sure, that you want to do other things then write? That you can't make time...or you just don't want to make time. You may be right, you may just not want to write anymore, you may have just 'lost the drive' as people would call it. Life may have gotten in the way and you would rather do something other then write. That's totally understandable.

Just know, that if you suddenly reconsider, you suddenly feel the urge to read all of your reviews over, and let yourself smile at all the things people would say to your stories. If you find yourself missing the thrill of writing an amazing piece - like I said, you might not feel that anymore, so I can't judge - just know.

You'll have all your readers behind you wherever you go.

Thank you for writing masterpieces for everyone to read...
randytpham chapter 3 . 6/30/2016
Fam Fam FAM, read this shit... I love your stories and so do 300 others... Keep on writing! Find something to get that spark going again! Look at things at a different angle! Don't be acute with your site be obtuse. Make it WIDE and let that brain of yours flow! I respect if you don't wish to continue to write. But as a fan I would like you to keep on writing stories man... I love seeing a badass Jaune Arc. Who doesn't?
BloodyCow chapter 10 . 6/30/2016
Godspeed! GL with life!
Just a Simple Nobody chapter 10 . 6/30/2016
Have you really lost that spark? When you and I were on Skype discussing my story, you seemed so excited for me. The time you took to help me, did more than inspiration from Coeur could ever have accomplished.
So I have to ask again. Do you truly believe that you've lost the spark to continue writing? If you have, then that's fine.
But if you haven't lost the urge to write, then not just for others, but for yourself. Continue writing, and like you told me after our session together. "Author a story that people can enjoy, but make sure that it is a story you can be proud to have written. That is the most important thing to a writer."
Regardless of what you choose to do, I wish you the best. Thanks again for helping me with my first chapter.
Nik41 chapter 10 . 6/29/2016
Lelouch you'll be remembered... Thank you for everything.
I hope you have success in your life buddy.
Goodbye
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