Oh God, that was so incredibly depressing.

I loved this chapter. Thank you for your hard work!

Uh oh, what’s kaneki gotten himself into now...

I definitely see a difference in the writing of this chapter and your earlier ones! I hope you keep up the good work!

Nooooooooo. Not big madam. I hope Kane ki will be alright! I’m glad you’re using the canon from the manga, since there’s so much more info that affects it so much.

It was alright, but I dont think the ghoul investigator would bother with much dialogue. Like all that talk about corrupting hide, you know.
There wasn’t really much wrong with it, but it didn’t WOW me either, if you know what I mean.

Some of your grammar with the speech marks is a little off. Mainly around the point when Hide was talking to Shinohara.

The story is okay, but it’s a little rushed.
I don’t think what ghouls smell is based off of their species. Canonically, to ghouls, Kaneki smells like Rize, but not ghoul/human. So I guess it’s the same here considering he’s her son.
Good luck with whatever you’re writing now!

Fucking awesome!

I don't care how long it takes you. I just want to keep reading. Before reading your story, I had already imagined a story in which Rize is Kaneki's mother. I loved your story sincerely. I don't know if you will continue, but from the bottom of my heart I thank you for taking your precious time to write.

NO WHY JUST WHEN ITS GONNA GET GOOD!

This is awesome!

Nice Story you had going there. Would have loved to read more about this.

Probably one of the best fanfics I have read, please make another chapter

Love this, is it going to be updated again in the future?

please i'm begging you bring back rize or at least make
kaneki run away