Reviews for Family Doesn't End with Blood |
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Guest chapter 9 . 5/29/2019 KEEP WRITING PLEASE |
Panda lover chapter 1 . 3/19/2019 Just a question. How is it down to so few ppl? New York City is big and there’s a lot of ppl, even if u cross out the ppl who don’t live nearby that area. Spider-Man could be anyone. Yet how is SHIELD able to find such a short list of candidates, even if you take out all the women,children and elderly. There should be more male teens or adults |
Charlie Jojo chapter 9 . 10/25/2018 Huh neat more of a Toby fan but andrew ain't half bad and liking the story so far. I wonder if pete's presence is gonna change anything or events I doubt he can make a major chamge now I. A2A but maybe the other movies that will play out in the mcu Hopefully peitro luves thisntime really sucked they introduced this cool cjaracter to only kill him by the end od the movie Ah well maybe infinity war will make a soft reset and revive him ornreplace him with Fox's version Also what are the chamces of gwen coming back in as supporting character always loved the relationship they had even as friends |
SkySaysHi chapter 7 . 10/14/2018 Hellloooooo. I completely understand about the wait. I hope you get better soon!this fanfiction is the BEST by far about this topic. Update soon! Love Skylar |
likeglitterandgold chapter 5 . 8/31/2018 How do you spell the acronym wrong if you get the long version right? You said SHEILD, but it’s the Strategic Homeland INTERVENTION. Not E, I! |
Spidercat chapter 9 . 6/26/2018 Please hurry up and write some more chapters ! |
Unknown chapter 9 . 6/19/2018 Is there any way that Peitro, Wanda, and Peter can bond and become friends, or at least for Peter to save Peitro’s life instead of him dying like in the movie? |
Unknown chapter 8 . 6/19/2018 I want Peter to somehow bond with Peitro and Wanda. Also, I don’t care if you respond to me or not as long as you read my comments. Besides, I don’t have an account...yet. |
Unknown chapter 7 . 6/19/2018 Oh, I play hockey too so I know all about injuries and how...distracting...they can be. This one time during practice I accidentally his the boards but my knee was bending so far that my shin guard exposed my knee so it hit the board HARD and it HURT. I couldn’t bend my knee for a while, it was like in a permanent slightly bent position that hurt every time I moved or put weight on it. I might have had a small fracture to the bone, defiantly A LOT of swelling and bruising. |
Unknown chapter 4 . 6/19/2018 The footprints were good but I just want to point out that I didn’t know his feet were muddy in the first place because you didn’t (clearly) mention if it rained that day. Also, I just want to point out that earlier in the story you mentioned how Tony was trying to get a blood sample. He could of used a tissue or handkerchief to wipe Athe blood from Peter’s ear pretending/actually worried about him and use that. |
Unknown chapter 3 . 6/19/2018 Are you going to turn Hairy evil... :( |
Unknown chapter 2 . 6/19/2018 Are there going to be avenger and Spider-Man bonding scenes (I mean other avengers). |
Unknown chapter 1 . 6/19/2018 If you needed a reason for Peter to be angry you could have said he was having a really bad day and the fact that Tony Stark showed up after the action happened could have been the last straw. Also, make Spider-Man super powerful becouse he is a genius with super strength, senses, reflexes/agility, a healing factor, and he can sense danger. He deserves to be given the credit he deserves! (Fun fact, I was terrified of spiders when I was younger but Spider-Man cured me of that. He is probably my favorite superhero) |
Bosma19 chapter 9 . 5/24/2018 Please update |
Guest chapter 9 . 4/20/2018 Props to you for writing. |