Love it

Would love to read more.

I just reread this beautiful story and looked at the date on it and thought I'd ask. Will you finish this story? Love it so much

Love this. Looking forward to more.

oh my charole heart 3 so perfect :) all the talks and sweet words. like how bass handled flynn and how charlie says that he may not be her first. but her last, her pure love is heling a bit of him everyday:) even though i like the 'other' charlie too its kind of nice too read one when she still has her inncoent hope, it can do a lot of good:) hope for more updates, soon :)

love this story soo much, completly amazing! 3 all de dialuge and the feelings, so good the whole story! love insecure bass and how charlie put her hand on his face and then kissed him, beautiful! like how theyn are changing the republic, just awesome!

I just finished catching up on this story and absolutely loved the genuine emotion of this chapter! It was so well written and I am truly looking forward to see where this story goes from hear. A big piece of me really hopes Bass just gets to stay there in this earlier time... - B

She still sounds so young, maybe she'd be better with Jason
And yeah, I'm gonna hang myself for even considering this.
But your story is really nice :)
And Jeremy is baaaaaack ! Thanks for sharing

it feels a bit odd, seeing bass in love with what I feel is a very young and innocent ( and not yet the warrior she is, and that fits Bass) Charlie, So I'm a bit sceptical sofar,but I like the way you write and your ideas. I'll keep reading , see if that weirdness goes away.

Thank you, I can't wait for more. I loved it

This chapter made the wait well worth it :) I loved how he just started babbling about how he was lying to Miles about the time him and Charlie were spending together. It's really kind of sweet that he's worried that she'll be mad at him. I'm glad that Charlie called him out on all of his "excuses" of why they shouldn't be together. This chapter is full of so many marvelous things, but when he says he has already hurt her, and he looks at the brand my heart melted when she told him that it was for both their names *sigh*.
You made me laugh when Charlie told him that she would deck him if he said they should wait. Lol.
I get why Charlie can't say I love you yet, but the feelings are there.
So glad that he has Flynn locked up, and I love how Charlie played right along with Bass.

Everything in this chapter is perfect, but I think the thing I love most is how he put Charlie in a bedroom that is connected to his by a secret passage through a bookcase ...that is just freaking awesome!

Really looking forward to what you have in store for us next.

You got sexy time, and you got awesome teamwork time...and it was all wrapped up with existential crisis time...love it. What else could you ask for from a story centered around Bass Monroe? :)

Hi Ice, so good to have another great chapter to this wonderful story! I so hope that Bass can keep Charlie - and that all the changes he's made will stay made... I could just picture Flynn's face! Such a good scene! Anyway, can't wait for more ! :) Magpie

That was a fantastic chapter! Can't wait for the next!

More please