This is sooo exciting

SO COOL
dude i think im starting to act like jason wth
BUT SERIOUSLY THIS IS AWESOME

Interesting plot :)

Loveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveit!
And this is only 1 chapter :D
Please continue, I wanna see what happens next!

Wow this is so amazing! I love mysteries like these! Can't wait for the next chapter :)

This is so good. I'm sorry for Levy, Natsu, Lucy and Igneel though... But the story is brilliant and I'll be biting my nails as I wait for an update. You really are a good writer...

I AM SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO FOLLOWING THIS!

Love the story. Please continue!
This seems to be a good story

Ok, so here's my guess, I think whoever Natsu's killer is, is involved with Levy's case, possibly the one who kidnapped her, or has been sending her strange vibes. And Levy found a secret message in the paragraph she kept rereading and has been thinking about it for too long to actually notice picking up the penutbutter cookie. I also think that Juvia is another one of Levy's friends or (and possibly both but I doubt it) she is working with the killer/kidnapper, who may or may not be Gray, but probably not. Ok that's my guess, then again I'm not very good at mysteries, hopefully it's right , but it's probably not XP.

Woah... Cool. Ghosts and disappearing people?! I'll definitely watch out for the next chapter!
Update soon, please. :)

Oh wow; this is really intruiging! Looking forward to future updates! :D

-Nike

this is incredibly interestinga nd i cannot wait for more.

natsu's a ghost...levy's missing...natsu's a ghost...igneel's an officer...natsu's a ghost...i'm stuck with natsu being a ghost...and i'm really weird for finding that bit funny...it's kind of a creepy funny version of him being in lucy's room all the time...

JESUS. ALL YOUR FANFICS ARE AWESOME LIKE WHAT THE HECK. THIS IS AWESOME!

Hahaha hahaha...I'm sorry, it's just...romance...ha...falling in love with a ghost. Ohmigosh. I'm trying really hard to imagine Lucy trying to kiss a ghost. Lawl