Good story yu should update i like this pairing but its not enough stories to go around

I'm a LuNa shipper whats up with naruto and nami naruto already haa a girl

Haki? That soon anyway how you can continue

Great chapter

It is excellent chapter.I look forward to future updates.

your story really really needs some original stuff. 99% of what you write is OP canon.

learn the difference between your/you are and their/there/they are. it is annoying to read a story when you make that mistake repeatedly.

Mmmmmmmmm nothing like a jelly doughnut

Awesome I liked this chapter

Took a while but the chapter is okay.

what is the crew positions?

Pls don't bring too many Naruto characters...it'll start with someone like Kiba or Shikamaru and will eventually continue till Orochimaru and Madara are part of the story...that would be sad. Besides I've read something similar where Naruto ends up fighting Kiba and then he faces Shikamaru at Syrup village.

good work

i still have hope that i didn't jinx myself with the last one.. i mean, it's gonna be seriously disappointing if Naruto can't use a 'flying blade' or whatever they call them officially.

now, i gotta get up and race to work.. i go stuck reading (again) and now i'm in a hurry (again).

well, obviously the pair knows Haki, but i'd like to hear if they will hang around SH's for long and if you're gonna give them some enemies to fight that are worth something.. and if naruto can actually use that sword and is not stuck in Zoro's level, since otherwise it would be really silly for him to carry such a high quality blade around a this point of the story.