changed my mind about Dahl for now...

ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT
And beautiful as ever! I have to thank you a thousandfold for this; it is a masterpiece far beyond anything of Homer, Dunsany, and Lovecraft. And your muse is far superior to those the pathetic dull-minded Greek wretches worshipped!

So sorry, I've had a good in my brain if you can't tell. ( I don't recommend it)
Anyways, I shall await the remainder of the saga with anxiety-induced bated breath. I swear I'm gonna have a party with pizza and brownies when the new story comes out!
I hope this will hasten the muse's return,
fare thee well for now...

Oh! The little meetings between Loki and Dahl stir up the little conspirator in me!
But letting her in on the Great Plot was a mistake! A risk, yes, as he said, and mayhap she will keep his secret now. But one day soon, Grete will see that a chance will benefit her. I can see it coming! When it will set her up well, the magic mistress will betray our darling darkling.

Just adding to the list of people who would be thrilled to read this wonderful fic. Even though it's been nearly four years, I shall not lose hope! The Lokane fandom NEEDS great works like this to continue to thrive! After all, since we lack canon, fan works are all we have to hold on to, haha. Be well, and know that there are people out there who hope you are doing great and can continue writing D!

omg, nooo! this story has not been updated since 2016? :-( how will I ever know what happens next? please, please come back and continue this one day if you’re able. I’ll be here patiently awaiting the continuation, because this story is just amazing. I read all parts over like two days and I’m hooked. fingers crossed that you’ll return one day :-)

This is really excellent. It’s not a story I would expect to see abandoned, so I do hope you return to it one day!

This series has been really great. I hope you have time to work on this again at some point

Good going! Is that it for good!? Does this story continue in another title?
- Margaret Phillips (docAnns Legends) Can u let me know by email or messaging?

I thought the chapter entertaining even tho it was long. The interaction between Jane and Loki was great, the tension, sexual tension if it is meant to such, was perfect. I have to admit I'm a Lokane fan & tempted to skip ahead to see if... But no, I intend to go as the entire story goes (great reading for an insomniac like me who isn't inspired at this time to work on my fanfics) I'd rather read your book instead. The more Loki - Jane the better! Keep up the exceptionally good work! -Margaret

Clever! The more Loki the better, and I can't wait to see what he does next! Soon I hope... -Margaret

So...its 2018 and I'm both happy and sad that I stumbled across your stories. What happens?! Seems you had a plan for this one... but I see the last update was 2016. If you actually still see these reviews, would you be so good as to at least post an outline of the Idea of the ending? Lol...I'm dying of suspense and now I've the feeling Jane and Loki will never have any resolution in this world.

Why do I always get addicted to the abandoned fanfics? You said back in 2016 that you are going to continue then, so I hope you're fine and that whatever is keeping you from writting will be sorted out soon and your inspiration will return to you. And now, to the real review:

This third volume is my favorite part because now that Loki is free from the tesseract, he's more himself - as scheming as always but not so sadistic, and you're making an amazing job with his characterization.

I also love your Jane - and her constant denial tegarding her attraction to Loki is my favorite part from this fic. The fact that it was the thought of Loki not being able to reach her what made her hesitate is Hjahqjqbakmah! Even when she justifies it with the fear that Loki will destroy something if she doesn't help him - And then, when she thinks she's goinf to die in the maze, it's Loki who she needs to see for a las time. I want to see how she slowly starts to understand that she's falling in love with him!

I kept thinking how would Jane react if she met one of Loki's old conquests. I just want to see her trying to justify her own jealousy!

Also, I wonder if Thor will eventually move to Asgard and if by then, he will know about Loki (and will probably be weirded out by Loki and Jane's friendship) or if Loki will remain as Jane's dirty secret.

I also love that Odin saved Loki and still loves his as his son, our poor baby needs a hug!

See? So many questions that still need answers and so many scenes we still have to see! You need to continue, please!

and so I reach the end of what you've written thus far. I loved it! Dying to know what happens next. Loki discovering he is really fallen for her was amazing. Everything he went through to save her, and I think I know why sif would hurt Jane. But, also see how she's probably the best to teach her fighting. anxious to know how the triad now deals with everything, Her next trials. Also really want to see Loki's first lessons.

I’m hooked! I hope you update soon! xD

Still trying to think of a good name for the series. For a while there with all the talk of siders and snakes and webs that theres something there. but can't think of it at the moment