damn your ego is way more than overinflated than harry will actually get

Intriguing and (well enough written in my opinion) a very good story. I like it, I like it a lot! It seems to be meshing the realities quite well, and I can hardly wait (but I will) to see where it all goes. I do know this, when someone who is not the creator of a character, writes about them, it is to have them do something that the creator doesn't want to or didn't think of. I know that I always think of my favorite characters doing things, I have never read of in books or seen them doing in movies. I think it is fantastic that others (here in "FanFiction") are actually writing their stories of what they want them to do in a "What If" world. For those who complain that the characters would not do this or that, forget them. You need to write this first for yourself, and then for the rest of us who do enjoy your take on what just might, could, should, would and probability (if a frog had wings, his ass wouldn't bump the ground nearly so often) can happen. I do know this as well, I am enjoying it and will follow it as long as you will write it. Also, do NOT feel pushed to post, sometimes the words and thoughts just flow and sometimes you have to cogitate for a bit. Just learn to let them grow at their own pace and those of us who appreciate them will be here to read them when they are posted.

Thank you so much for sharing.

This would have been an interesting story if the backbone of the entire thing wasn't the objectively awful, two-dimensional fanon evil Dumbledore trope. As it is, it ended up being what all Evil Dumbledore stories are: long, extended rants about made-up problems with the Harry Potter setting couched in a super-Harry fixfiction power fantasy.

I really wish it had been better than that.

This was a great story

It would be cool to see a Harry Potter crossover with either Persona 1

It is a good story except for Nanako getting kidnapped that was stupid considering she was being protected by Harry at the time you should rewrite it to have him stepping out for a bit because there is no way he would not use his magic to do so. Why bother giving him a persona if he did not use it in any meaningful way? It is an interesting concept but Harry had no impact on the story itself

I loved it, however I felt the ending seemed, well, weak. I get why they just left fudge and dumbledore go without a fight, but it felt kinda weak to me. Overall good, persona over HP!

This is pretty good. Of course you over simplified the plot of persona but this is like a prologue, enough to let newbies (me too!) Know what to expect from persona and how you will incorprate this in HP. Also, love the couples!

This is a great story idea but I think Persona 1 and 2 would fit in better since Harry canonically is born in 1980

i think theres some missing words in one of the conversations after summoning, menerva said " !"

What about Marie, from Golden - are you going to include her in an updated version of this fic.

Good story, only bit that annoyed me was when Kazuya got stabbed. I like how Kazuya didn't overshadow Yu and just became a part of the group.

Nanatame might not of killed the people he kidnapped, the ones he was trying to save, but he still stabbed Kazuya. So why let him go?

Whu didn't he use magic to stop Nanako from being taken?

Thanks for the chapters _.

wish there was a squel