that was an amazing ride and I enjoyed it immensely.. although it does break my heart that it somehow happened to u without the happy ending

I had the stupidest smile on my face reading this.. yeah I expected a proposal.

he's planning a grand gesture for her at school

damn u made me cry and scared the shit out of me

well .. shit
I can't believe how good this story is and how underrated it is

yeah my thoughts are that I'm pissed

I sort of expected the Jasper thing and suspected the Charlie part

his grandmother

okay now I need to reply with my original review to this chapter which was that I absolutely loved this one so much.. I could feel their desperation and hopelessness. I want to thank you coz I've read many stories with close enough plots and they always have that plot twist of the lie similar to this one in this chapter and that's it.. it makes them grow apart and they both believe the lie and I'm seriously was sick of this. this was refreshingly different and making sense too.
although it just makes me wanna just grab both of them and shake them hard and tell them get ur act together and just plan for ur future..u have ur whole lives ahead of u.. go away for college together and make an amazing future together ure both brilliant. but I understand they're kids and think of right now .. sigh.

I almost lost this story I was so pissed.. I couldn't find it in my list and now I can't add it to favs.. stupid application

this was really intense and passionate.. I loved it

it was beautiful and heart breaking

sigh .. this is breaking my heart

awwwww.. I love that she kissed him

I wished for a small touch or a light kiss